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8 Prinz-albrechts-strasse

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Barb I bow to your greatness again lol! The way you measure your prose and not just lump it in paragraphs create such a wonderful sense of tension and make you want more and more and more! Then there is your actual writing! I feel like I am actually Barbara Hahn because of the picture you paint through her eyes. Then there is the actual content of this story,which as an almost history minor, is arousing to say the least! I can sense Barbara's distaste of being exposed in front of men (I wonder why? lol) and also her fear of what is going to happen soon. I wish I had any criticism but since I'm not a writer, nor an English major so I do not. I truly hope my stories can be half this good! (joins the hoard clamoring for the next segment)
 
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Barb I bow to your greatness again lol! The way you measure your prose and not just lump it in paragraphs create such a wonderful sense of tension and make you want more and more and more! Then there is your actual writing! I feel like I am actually Barbara Hahn because of the picture you paint through her eyes. Then there is the actual content of this story,which as an almost history minor, is arousing to say the least! I can sense Barbara's distaste of being exposed in front of men (I wonder why? lol) and also her fear of what is going to happen soon. I wish I had any criticism but since I'm not a writer, nor an English major I do not. I truly hope my stories can be half this good! (joins the hoard clamoring for the next segment)
Hey! You will do just fine!
God! I need to go to sleep$
 
8 Prinz-Albrecht-Strasse (part 3)

Muscles stiff and aching,
back against the cold wall,
arms stretched over head,
scared, naked and shivering

Bare light bulb overhead,
casting my shadow,
across the floor,
and halfway up far wall

Hours pass, no sense of time
Is it daytime, cannot tell?
must be by now,
I am very hungry

Interrogators have begun their work,
I hear them talking,
moving down the corridor,
boots pounding on the floor

Keys jangle, a door opens,
someone down the way,
is dragged from their cell,
pleading and crying

Past my cell in a blur,
three men manhandling,
a single victim,
shouts and blows

Every so often,
the scene repeats,
one by one the cells,
are emptied

Down the corridor,
screams and shrieks,
only god knows,
what goes on down there

Keys jangle once again,
but this time its for me,
door swings open,
three men stride in

Well fraulein Hahn,
your turn has come,
we trust you haven’t
been waiting too long


chortles the lead man,
moving close,
foul breath,
in my face

He reaches out,
and cups my breast,
tweaking my nipple,
with his thumb

Very nice,
He murmurs,
cupping the other,
and tweaking same

I grit my teeth,
and glare at him,
as his hand moves,
slowly downward

I turn my head away,
as he palms my mound,
probes a finger,
along my crevice

He applies pressure,
I bear down
and instinctively,
press my thighs together

To no avail,
he soon works,
his finger in,
moving in and out

I gasp and turn my head,
from side to side
helpless to resist,
his unwanted intrusion

Well good enough,
he declares to the other,
Fraulein Hahn seems,
quite ready and eager


“You bastards,”
I hiss,
as they take,
me down

And bundle,
me out the door,
and down the corridor,
for “questioning”

Into a room,
I am shoved,
a large table,
in the center

From the table,
other men,
are removing,
a naked woman

She is unconscious,
limp in their grip,
her body covered,
with marks of the whip

As she passes,
I study her face,
instant recognition,
a co-worker

Two offices,
down from mine,
secretarial assistant,
to a Wehrmacht general

Blood and filth,
washed away,
from the metal table
with a bucket

You are next,
fraulein Hahn,
your table awaits you,

I am told mockingly

Hands under my arms
others gripping my feet,
hoisted unceremoniously,
on to the cold metal surface

Arms secured overhead,
ankles shackled in place,
my tight little ass flattened,
against the table top

Wrenching my chin,
aside to face him,
he stares menacingly,
into my fearful eyes

Now fraulein Hahn,
it is time to talk,
tell us everything,
about the plotting


There must have been meetings, yes?
People coming and going,
Who were they, how often did they come?
We want names and dates


And notes must have been taken,
You are a stenographer,
They must have been taken by you,
Where are they fraulein Hahn?


“I don’t know what,
you are talking about,”
I stammer in confusion,
terror rising inside of me

We have ways,
of making you talk,

He sneers at me,
and looks to his men

Two long wires,
are suddenly produced,
each one tipped with,
a nasty looking saw-tooth clip

“Oh God, no, please,”
I plead and begin to squirm,
as he mounds a breast
and teases my nipple

Then he affixes the clamp,
it hurts like hell,
and I scream,
“Ow, please, no please!”

Before I know it,
he has done the same,
to my other,
poor breast

And now he dangles,
in front of my face,
a third wire,
with an even larger clip

As I squirm and buck,
he reaches between my thighs,
spreads my vulva,
and attaches the clip

“My God, that hurts,
please I beg of you,
I know nothing,
don’t do this please”

He nods to his henchmen,
and suddenly,
the most awful,
wave of pain assaults me

My breasts are on fire,
my loins are burned,
I push with my heels,
and arch my back

My screams and shrieks,
echo off the walls,
I twist and turn,
my breasts jiggle and shake

Then he turns the current off,
and I collapse,
shuddering and shaking,
my head buzzing

Again fraulein Hahn?
“No, no, please, no”
He does it again,
I scream and buck

Three more times,
and then a rest,
panting, aching,
covered with sweat

Enough for now,
he purrs in my ear,
Take her away,
back to her cell


Give her a while,
to think and remember,
next time she will
be sure to tell


Or else……..

TO BE CONTINUED


Barbaria, 2014
 
Omg this is so great Barb! There are no words to describe how amazing this is. The description of her feelings during the "questioning" are so rich and realistic! I can't wait for the next installment! I can't see Barbara taking too much more of this though...
 
8 Prinz-Albrecht-Strasse (part 3)

Muscles stiff and aching,
back against the cold wall,
arms stretched over head,
scared, naked and shivering

Bare light bulb overhead,
casting my shadow,
across the floor,
and halfway up far wall

Hours pass, no sense of time
Is it daytime, cannot tell?
must be by now,
I am very hungry

Interrogators have begun their work,
I hear them talking,
moving down the corridor,
boots pounding on the floor

Keys jangle, a door opens,
someone down the way,
is dragged from their cell,
pleading and crying

Past my cell in a blur,
three men manhandling,
a single victim,
shouts and blows

Every so often,
the scene repeats,
one by one the cells,
are emptied

Down the corridor,
screams and shrieks,
only god knows,
what goes on down there

Keys jangle once again,
but this time its for me,
door swings open,
three men stride in

Well fraulein Hahn,
your turn has come,
we trust you haven’t
been waiting too long


chortles the lead man,
moving close,
foul breath,
in my face

He reaches out,
and cups my breast,
tweaking my nipple,
with his thumb

Very nice,
He murmurs,
cupping the other,
and tweaking same

I grit my teeth,
and glare at him,
as his hand moves,
slowly downward

I turn my head away,
as he palms my mound,
probes a finger,
along my crevice

He applies pressure,
I bear down
and instinctively,
press my thighs together

To no avail,
he soon works,
his finger in,
moving in and out

I gasp and turn my head,
from side to side
helpless to resist,
his unwanted intrusion

Well good enough,
he declares to the other,
Fraulein Hahn seems,
quite ready and eager


“You bastards,”
I hiss,
as they take,
me down

And bundle,
me out the door,
and down the corridor,
for “questioning”

Into a room,
I am shoved,
a large table,
in the center

From the table,
other men,
are removing,
a naked woman

She is unconscious,
limp in their grip,
her body covered,
with marks of the whip

As she passes,
I study her face,
instant recognition,
a co-worker

Two offices,
down from mine,
secretarial assistant,
to a Wehrmacht general

Blood and filth,
washed away,
from the metal table
with a bucket

You are next,
fraulein Hahn,
your table awaits you,

I am told mockingly

Hands under my arms
others gripping my feet,
hoisted unceremoniously,
on to the cold metal surface

Arms secured overhead,
ankles shackled in place,
my tight little ass flattened,
against the table top

Wrenching my chin,
aside to face him,
he stares menacingly,
into my fearful eyes

Now fraulein Hahn,
it is time to talk,
tell us everything,
about the plotting


There must have been meetings, yes?
People coming and going,
Who were they, how often did they come?
We want names and dates


And notes must have been taken,
You are a stenographer,
They must have been taken by you,
Where are they fraulein Hahn?


“I don’t know what,
you are talking about,”
I stammer in confusion,
terror rising inside of me

We have ways,
of making you talk,

He sneers at me,
and looks to his men

Two long wires,
are suddenly produced,
each one tipped with,
a nasty looking saw-tooth clip

“Oh God, no, please,”
I plead and begin to squirm,
as he mounds a breast
and teases my nipple

Then he affixes the clamp,
it hurts like hell,
and I scream,
“Ow, please, no please!”

Before I know it,
he has done the same,
to my other,
poor breast

And now he dangles,
in front of my face,
a third wire,
with an even larger clip

As I squirm and buck,
he reaches between my thighs,
spreads my vulva,
and attaches the clip

“My God, that hurts,
please I beg of you,
I know nothing,
don’t do this please”

He nods to his henchmen,
and suddenly,
the most awful,
wave of pain assaults me

My breasts are on fire,
my loins are burned,
I push with my heels,
and arch my back

My screams and shrieks,
echo off the walls,
I twist and turn,
my breasts jiggle and shake

Then he turns the current off,
and I collapse,
shuddering and shaking,
my head buzzing

Again fraulein Hahn?
“No, no, please, no”
He does it again,
I scream and buck

Three more times,
and then a rest,
panting, aching,
covered with sweat

Enough for now,
he purrs in my ear,
Take her away,
back to her cell


Give her a while,
to think and remember,
next time she will
be sure to tell


Or else……..

TO BE CONTINUED


Barbaria, 2014
Barbaria this is just brilliant. So tense and sinister, and you are now so full of terror and pain, but still waiting...for something worse ...
 
Omg this is so great Barb! There are no words to describe how amazing this is. The description of her feelings during the "questioning" are so rich and realistic! I can't wait for the next installment! I can't see Barbara taking too much more of this though...

Barb is surprisingly resilient ... hopefully good for a couple more rounds before they execute her;). Hmmmm. Wonder what methods they will use? Suggestions anyone?

Barbaria this is just brilliant. So tense and sinister, and you are now so full of terror and pain, but still waiting...for something worse ...

Yes, what could be worse?:rolleyes: Always open to suggestions....

THANKS TO BOTH OF YOU FOR THE NICE COMMENTS.
 
Barb is surprisingly resilient ... hopefully good for a couple more rounds before they execute her;). Hmmmm. Wonder what methods they will use? Suggestions anyone?



Yes, what could be worse?:rolleyes: Always open to suggestions....

THANKS TO BOTH OF YOU FOR THE NICE COMMENTS.
your welcome as always! As far as suggestion you seem to be doing fine lol. But perhaps some torture with the other prisoners? Seems playing them off of each other would be a good way to get some verifiable info...:devil:
 
your welcome as always! As far as suggestion you seem to be doing fine lol. But perhaps some torture with the other prisoners? Seems playing them off of each other would be a good way to get some verifiable info...:devil:

I like the way she thinks;) Any volunteers out there?
 
You know I'm always willing, too!
;)
 
You know I'm always willing, too!
;)

Oh Siss, you are on long term contract;):D. Just like the big studios in the good old days. You appear at my command. Roll the credits. See there your are. Enter stage right.
I have a feeling we both might enjoy the next part of Barbs story Sis! (well not in her story but you know what I mean..)

Careful what you wish for.....next part could be it for both of you.
 
I have a feeling we both might enjoy the next part of Barbs story Sis! (well not in her story but you know what I mean..)
I do!
Oh Siss, you are on long term contract;):D. Just like the big studios in the good old days. You appear at my command. Roll the credits. See there your are. Enter stage right.


Careful what you wish for.....next part could be it for both of you.
Uh oh!
:p
 
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