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Womb & Wound

blood drops ride rivulets that spiderweb
and expand her wound
right round red hot cheeks
across her ribs and heaving roof of
her bare naked belly, they ride
right down the alley
formed from her hips and
drip
drip
drip

Salud!

pin pricks the tips of those thorns
the flesh is fine and thin as a veil
but inside her mind is hell
that morning she woke up and got sick
thinking it would please her master
to expel and deploy
her private passion play
step
by
step

Cheers!

their arms wave in adulation
and nailed the proclamation
of her heroic rise and fall
her arms bound to the crossbeam
her whole body pulled from the ground
where she was stripped
of one last breath on earth
in
and
out

Prost!

nightfall was good then
heavenly bounty surrendered
at the gates of the eternal city
she cried in all her fury
Sophia has slipped in early slumber
as I die here on this cross
the sky started bleeding
drip
drip
drip
 
This is perplexing to me because I don't understand it but I know it is well written...

Tree

Well, I *think* I get it, but I don't like to over analyse literature, so I'll let the words speak for themselves :D
Nice work Adobe, it pays to read it more than once
 
Womb & Wound

blood drops ride rivulets that spiderweb
and expand her wound
right round red hot cheeks
across her ribs and heaving roof of
her bare naked belly, they ride
right down the alley
formed from her hips and
drip
drip
drip

Salud!
as a dutch speaking member, i think that i like the words
merci adobe;)
Well, I *think* I get it, but I don't like to over analyse literature, so I'll let the words speak for themselves :D
Nice work Adobe, it pays to read it more than once
indeed:rolleyes:
 
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