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[LittleSiss]

The darkness...the darkness... What is it about the darkness?

It's then that I find myself not searching for truth but delusions

Happiness in all the wrong places

I'm just a girl

Why does this happen?

I don't want but yearn for it

Forbidden horrific unknown wonders

Shall I sleep tonight?

The wind at my back

The Stars over my head

Alone

Cold and sweat pouring out of every inch of my skin

The night so glorious before me

I shall drift away before the dawn

Wishing

Hoping for what could have been.

 

[thehangingtree]

very nice in its sad way...

Goodnight all

T

 

[Barbaria1]

The darkness...the darkness... What is it about the darkness?

It's then that I find myself not searching for truth but delusions

Happiness in all the wrong places

I'm just a girl

Why does this happen?

I don't want but yearn for it

Forbidden horrific unknown wonders

Shall I sleep tonight?

The wind at my back

The Stars over my head

Alone

Cold and sweat pouring out of every inch of my skin

The night so glorious before me

I shall drift away before the dawn

Wishing

Hoping for what could have been.

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Sorry, I missed this last night. I must have been lost in the darkness of my soul too. But reading this now, raises my spirits. It's both inspiring and beautiful Siss. Rest assured ... you never wish, yearn and hope alone. Lovely poem!!!!

 

[xso]

The darkness...the darkness... What is it about the darkness?

It's then that I find myself not searching for truth but delusions

Happiness in all the wrong places

I'm just a girl

Why does this happen?

I don't want but yearn for it

Forbidden horrific unknown wonders

Shall I sleep tonight?

The wind at my back

The Stars over my head

Alone

Cold and sweat pouring out of every inch of my skin

The night so glorious before me

I shall drift away before the dawn

Wishing

Hoping for what could have been.

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Beautiful poem S! I object however to your statement 'that you are just a girl'. You are indeed a very special 'crux' girl, and those girls are the best girls in the world.....

Hope to see you soon on a cross in this forum!

 

[Pia]

The darkness...the darkness... What is it about the darkness?

It's then that I find myself not searching for truth but delusions

Happiness in all the wrong places

I'm just a girl

Why does this happen?

I don't want but yearn for it

Forbidden horrific unknown wonders

Shall I sleep tonight?

The wind at my back

The Stars over my head

Alone

Cold and sweat pouring out of every inch of my skin

The night so glorious before me

I shall drift away before the dawn

Wishing

Hoping for what could have been.

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You do this so well Siss

 

[Pia]

Beautiful poem S! I object however to your statement 'that you are just a girl'. You are indeed a very special 'crux' girl, and those girls are the best girls in the world.....

Hope to see you soon on a cross in this forum!


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But it's an achingly sweet line....

 

[messaline]

Oh, what happens my little sister ? Are you wishing for something ?

Anyway, you told that so well !

 

[jacksjg89]

The darkness...the darkness... What is it about the darkness?

It's then that I find myself not searching for truth but delusions

Happiness in all the wrong places

I'm just a girl

Why does this happen?

I don't want but yearn for it

Forbidden horrific unknown wonders

Shall I sleep tonight?

The wind at my back

The Stars over my head

Alone

Cold and sweat pouring out of every inch of my skin

The night so glorious before me

I shall drift away before the dawn

Wishing

Hoping for what could have been.

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Very immersive. I feel it.

All the best poetry seems to be written from a cross.

 

[LittleSiss]

Thank you everyone for your kind words!

 

[Jollyrei]

Lovely poem, Siss. Some very subtle meanings in there, and a sweetly sad, wistful feeling.
Pk is right - you do this very well indeed.