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Wragg

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Now Jollyrei, one dismal day
Took up his sickle blade,
And off he went, this spectral gent
To seek a mortal maid.

To cause no fright he went by night
His journey was quite long;
To pass the time he sang a rhyme
And this was Jolly’s song:

Preserve your breath, for I am death!
“And well you know my role!
“Please don’t despair, O maiden fair
“I’ve come to take your soul!”


The ghostly male crossed hill and dale
Towards the lady’s fate.
But even though he’d far to go
He still was not too late.

DeathTears03a.jpg

At rise of sun, his journey done
He stood there by her side;
It seemed not wrong to sing his song
To her, the crucified.

Preserve your breath, for I am death!
“And well you know my role!
“Please don’t despair, O maiden fair
“I’ve come to take your soul!”


DeathTears02a.jpg
For three long days of pain-filled haze
Through ev’ry laboured breath
She’d searched in vain throughout the pain
For any sign of death.

Now at the end she met her friend
She saw him from above
And as she died, the lady sighed
These final words of love:

O take my breath, for you are death!
“And well I know your role!
“I don’t despair, I’m glad you’re there
“To guard my mortal soul!”


To his surprise his empty eyes
Sprang forth a wistful tear;
With human pain his bony frame
Embraced that maiden dear.

And to this day, so some men say –
It is the strangest thing!
For as the breeze bestirs the trees
You still can hear her sing:

O take my breath, for you are death!
“And well I know your role!
“I don’t despair, I’m glad you’re there
“To guard my mortal soul!”


DeathTears01a.jpg

Images: Jollyrei.
Poem: Wragg
 
Now Jollyrei, one dismal day
Took up his sickle blade,
And off he went, this spectral gent
To seek a mortal maid.

To cause no fright he went by night
His journey was quite long;
To pass the time he sang a rhyme
And this was Jolly’s song:

Preserve your breath, for I am death!
“And well you know my role!
“Please don’t despair, O maiden fair
“I’ve come to take your soul!”


The ghostly male crossed hill and dale
Towards the lady’s fate.
But even though he’d far to go
He still was not too late.

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At rise of sun, his journey done
He stood there by her side;
It seemed not wrong to sing his song
To her, the crucified.

Preserve your breath, for I am death!
“And well you know my role!
“Please don’t despair, O maiden fair
“I’ve come to take your soul!”


View attachment 571752
For three long days of pain-filled haze
Through ev’ry laboured breath
She’d searched in vain throughout the pain
For any sign of death.

Now at the end she met her friend
She saw him from above
And as she died, the lady sighed
These final words of love:

O take my breath, for you are death!
“And well I know your role!
“I don’t despair, I’m glad you’re there
“To guard my mortal soul!”


To his surprise his empty eyes
Sprang forth a wistful tear;
With human pain his bony frame
Embraced that maiden dear.

And to this day, so some men say –
It is the strangest thing!
For as the breeze bestirs the trees
You still can hear her sing:

O take my breath, for you are death!
“And well I know your role!
“I don’t despair, I’m glad you’re there
“To guard my mortal soul!”


View attachment 571753

Images: Jollyrei.
Poem: Wragg
Amazing Poem:clapping::clapping::clapping::clapping::clapping::clapping::clapping:
 
I think the archive is well stocked, and sometimes overlooked by members.

yeah I really need to take a trip over there and just get lost for a few days. It's kinda difficult sometimes with all the notifications I get about likes and replies, not to mention I usually have several different web pages open as I multitask.
 
yeah I really need to take a trip over there and just get lost for a few days. It's kinda difficult sometimes with all the notifications I get about likes and replies, not to mention I usually have several different web pages open as I multitask.

Hehehehe ... slow down and breathe a bit! ;)
 
It is great to see a new poem from Wragg, and I'm honoured to get such a nicely romantic role in a story that goes from a simple day on the job to a deeply moving encounter. It really fits into the Death and the Maiden theme, and I tried to keep that in mind in the images, as well as reflecting the fantastical and erotic feel of the poem. But honestly, the poem doesn't need the images - it more needs a "Lied" and some good harmonisation. :clapping::clapping::beer:
 
This topic makes me want to rewatch meet joe black.

Trailer for this who may not know about it:



 
Now Jollyrei, one dismal day
Took up his sickle blade,
And off he went, this spectral gent
To seek a mortal maid.

To cause no fright he went by night
His journey was quite long;
To pass the time he sang a rhyme
And this was Jolly’s song:

Preserve your breath, for I am death!
“And well you know my role!
“Please don’t despair, O maiden fair
“I’ve come to take your soul!”


The ghostly male crossed hill and dale
Towards the lady’s fate.
But even though he’d far to go
He still was not too late.

View attachment 571751

At rise of sun, his journey done
He stood there by her side;
It seemed not wrong to sing his song
To her, the crucified.

Preserve your breath, for I am death!
“And well you know my role!
“Please don’t despair, O maiden fair
“I’ve come to take your soul!”


View attachment 571752
For three long days of pain-filled haze
Through ev’ry laboured breath
She’d searched in vain throughout the pain
For any sign of death.

Now at the end she met her friend
She saw him from above
And as she died, the lady sighed
These final words of love:

O take my breath, for you are death!
“And well I know your role!
“I don’t despair, I’m glad you’re there
“To guard my mortal soul!”


To his surprise his empty eyes
Sprang forth a wistful tear;
With human pain his bony frame
Embraced that maiden dear.

And to this day, so some men say –
It is the strangest thing!
For as the breeze bestirs the trees
You still can hear her sing:

O take my breath, for you are death!
“And well I know your role!
“I don’t despair, I’m glad you’re there
“To guard my mortal soul!”


View attachment 571753

Images: Jollyrei.
Poem: Wragg
I hope, it's not a big mistake, when the italic font not will visible in the next Cruxers Digest.
Sorry, a technical issue! I collect the stories and poems in a textfile without italic or bold marks.
 
I hope, it's not a big mistake, when the italic font not will visible in the next Cruxers Digest.
Sorry, a technical issue! I collect the stories and poems in a textfile without italic or bold marks.
I don't think it matters, Madi, the italics represent the refrain which is obvious enough with or without them. ;)
 
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O take my breath, for you are death!
“And well I know your role!
“I don’t despair, I’m glad you’re there
“To guard my mortal soul!”
Good grief, Jollyrei!

You ran up that sculpture pretty quickly! :cool:

I've never had a poem illustrated in marble before! :)
 
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