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Vorenus’s New Idea (A crucifixion story)

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I am new member that has lurked for a year. This is my first story. It is nearly all totally made up. :)
Unfortunately I have no artistic skills to illustrate the story
I had to split into multiple parts as it is moe than 20,000 character long
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The events of this story take place during the rebellion against Rome in Gaul in the long hot summer of 29BC. Vorenus was a centurion in the expeditionary force sent against the tribes. Although he saw some action against the Treveri his cohort was allocated mostly to mopping up duties and dispensing Roman justice where necessary. And in Gaul at that time it was necessary everywhere! We don’t know if the innovation in crucifixion attributed to him was really Vorenus’s idea. More likely it came from an execution squad that was under him and he took credit for it.

We shall call it his idea because that is how history records it. His idea was to take the crude Crux Simplex, a simple upright pole to which the victim was secured, and develop it something that killed far more slowly and painfully and did so in a more aesthetically pleasing way than the more usual “T” shaped cross

The account we have is probably not the first time it was used to execute a rebel as the execution squad seem too assured in their job for it to have been their first time. The victim was a Gaulish maid named Una. She almost certainly wasn’t an active rebel but a refugee. But it was her bad luck to be caught fleeing in an area where any Gauls apprehended were to be executed.

The first Vorenus saw of Una was when she was brought by some soldiers to his tent. For a Gaul she was an attractive girl with cropped blond hair and a taut wiry frame. She had already been stripped of her clothes and was standing before him totally naked with her wrists bound tightly together behind her back. Her breasts were small but nicely formed. Her pubic hair was shaved in the Gaulish tradition. She had well-formed wide child-bearing hips and would have made a good breeding slave had that been her destiny. Vorenus thought she was 19 years old. She was babbling in some barbarian tongue that none of them understood. Probably something about her not being an enemy of Rome. On Vorenus’s nod, a soldier shut her up by striking her hard in the belly. It didn’t matter why she was there. She would be crucified today on the upright crux pole that was erected by their encampment.

Vorenus barked an order to fetch an execution squad. They might as well get it done now while the cohort wasn’t overly taxed. And his men could do with the entertainment

Scourging

The execution squad led Una to a tree with wide strong branches. As her back was turned to him Vorenus noted approvingly that her wrists has been crossed before being tied behind her back. They were already in the right position for nailing. A stout rope was tied to her bound wrists, the loose end thrown around a branch and she was jerked up dangling in free air. She shrieked as her shoulders suddenly bore all her weight rotating up so that her arms were almost vertical. Her ankles were tied to adjacent tree trunks giving perfect access to her inner thighs and crotch. Una was about 5 foot tall. Her feet were hanging only a few inches above the ground giving the men who would whip her a commanding position over her back.

Vorenus hoped they would not overdo the scourging. The last thing he wanted was for her to die too quickly through blood loss and tissue damage. But he knew better than to say anything as this was his most experienced execution squad. They would do a good job.

Two soldiers stood either side of Una, each with the traditional five braided whip with fragments of bone and metal weaved into it to rip the skin. Then they started, each one taking turns to lash Una’s back, buttocks and upper legs. Her back went red very quickly. She howled and bucked. Then it was over. Vorenus counted only 20 lashes. Better that than to overdo it. Her buttocks and back were ripped enough to given her an interesting time on the cross but the blood loss was acceptable. She would drink long of death. Una yelped in a grunt of horror as her shoulders twisted up and dislocated totally.

Crucifixion

It soon spread around the camp that a crucifixion was in progress. And any that did not hear it from a comrade would have known it from the cacophony of the lashes and agonised screams from Una. Before long Una had an audience of any soldier in the camp who wasn’t on patrol or on perimeter duty.

First things first, the chief executioner reset Una’s shoulders as in her present state it would impossible to nail her wrists to the rear of the crux pole. Then he grabbed a fistful of her blond hair and started walking and dragging her to the cross. The cross was just outside the wooded area of their encampment. In that position it and its victim could be seen easily by any passing Gaulish reconnaissance party. Also there would be no shade to comfort its victims as they hung from the cross during this hot summer. There was plenty of room there to erect new crosses as one was rarely enough.

Una saw the cross for the first time. It didn’t look like what she expected. It was just a pole about 6 feet high about 6 inches wide. There was no cross beam to secure her arms. But about half way up there was this thin vertical piece of wood hammered into a slot into the pole. Protruding like a strange nose from the face of the pole. On its upper edge it had blunt teeth cut into it. What was it for? The executioner lifted her up high enough so that her wrists - still bound behind her back - slipped behind the upright crux pole. Then he lowered her gently so that her crotch rested on the ‘nose’ It was only about 2 inches wide so it was immediately uncomfortable for Una to sit on. Its teeth cut into her crotch; all of her weight was now resting of a slender piece of wood between her legs. It was what the Romans called the ‘sedile’.

The smell of shit suddenly assaulted Una’s nose. She saw one of the execution squad bringing a bucket that stank of piss and shit. He reached into the bucket and brought out a long iron spike that was smeared with shit and leered at her. No they couldn’t possibly be about to violate her with that?

Vorenus admired the coordinated work of his men. Another of the squad crouched down below Una and pushed her left foot up to press against the side of the crux pole, holding it there with a vice like grip she couldn’t resist. Taking great care the soldier with the spike placed a small wooden washer over it, positioned the point of the spike over Una’s heel bone and then hit the head of the spike with a hammer. It took four heavy blows to drive the spike though Una’s heel and into the cross. With each blow Una shrieked like a maddened animal. Then they moved to her right foot and repeated the procedure nailing it place to the other side of the crux pole. Una had never known such pain. It started in her heels but surged up her legs and into her groin. From Una’s agonized reaction Vorenus noted that his squad has successfully nailed her through her sural nerves. The soiling of the spikes with excrement would mean that her wounds would turn septic quickly and hurt her even more

Una was now nailed in a crouching position. If she needed to relieve the mounting pain of the sedile then she would have raise herself by pushing down on her feet. Surely that would be impossible, especially as her wrists were uselessly bound behind her back behind the crux pole and had no leverage at all?

Vorenus knew the next part of the crucifixion was the trickiest. It involved driving a spike through both of Una’s wrists and into the back of the crux pole. Any mistake by the executioner and an artery could be severed and the victim would bleed out quickly – a denial of Roman justice that would bring shame to all involved!

The chief executioner stood on a stool behind the cross. He took Una’s bound wrists and pushed them steadily up the upright pole until they could move no more. This was of course extremely painful for Una as her recently dislocated shoulders were being forced again into a rigorous strappado. The motion also forced her lacerated back onto the rough wood of the cross. When he had taken them as far as he could he locked her wrists into place with another length of rope. Stepping down for a moment he retrieved an extra -long shit smeared spike from the bucket. He loosened the rope that bound her wrists together fine tuning the relative position of her wrists to ensure a clean passage of the spike through the median nerve in both limbs. Slipping a wooden washer onto the spike he carefully positioned its point touching Una’s wrists: one, two, three, four, five, six blows accompanied by howls from poor Una. He tapped the spike a little more but stopped to ensure that Una’s wrists could rotate around the axis of the spike. After he was sure he cut away the ropes so that only the spike held her crossed wrists to the cross. This motion would allow her to gain some relief from the sedile at the cost of excruciating agony in her arms and wrists.
 
Part Two

Una on the cross

It was now done. Una was now crucified. Her crossed wrists were hoisted and nailed into position so far up her back that they almost reached the level of her shoulder blades, making it impossible to take full breaths and utterly agonising to do so. Desperate for air, Una pushed down on her nailed feet By doing so she swapped the agony shooting up her arms and into her chest with agony racing up her legs and into her crotch. But she also relieved the torment of the sedile pressing on her cunt. Until the time passed that it took to take some gasps of air. Then she dropped down to repeat the cycle in a little while. She could use together her nailed feet and nailed crossed wrists to raise herself. But then she had agony everywhere and she just couldn’t do it.

All Roman execution squads have the special things they like to do to their victims, to give it a personal touch. Vorenus’s squad was no different. Such as nailing the scrotum of male victims to the sedile. His signature embellishment of female victims was to pierce the clitoris with a blunt needle and to insert a slender blunted spikes through her breasts just behind her nipples, piercing the areola. This he now did to Una so didn’t seem to make much difference to her suffering which was already intense. Though the next time Una pushed up with her feet to breathe she found that the agony consumed her clitoris. As she performed her rhythmic almost involuntary dance on the cross, Una rubbed her raw back find torment in nerves exposed by her scourging. There was no position she could adopt where she was not in agony. She could only choose between competing agonies. She tried not to breathe so she would expire quickly but it didn’t work. Her traitorous body compelled her to suffer torment to breathe. She could not stop it.

You might think that was the end of the story but Una has just begun her journey towards death. It will take several days for her to die. She is surrounded by young lusty Roman soldiers who are looking forward to the show. They have seen young fit barbarian women crucified before and they will take pleasure from her. This is no breach of discipline. Vorenus expects his men to take their lust out on Una. It is part of the punishment. Rome expects it.

Day One

Una had been on the cross for 3 hours. The sun was high and it was very hot day She panted and her fair skin was burning. She noticed a young Roman soldier standing in front of her. His eyes were level with hers. Then she had to push up on her nailed feet to breathe and the worst pain she ever felt shot up her legs and into her cunt. He was holding a cup. He said something she didn’t understand. Did she want something to drink? Yes she wanted something to drink. She nodded vigorously. He held the cup to her lips. She drank. It was warm. It was urine. But she drank it anyway. He laughed and said something lewd to another soldier. He came close to her face still smiling and spat in her mouth. She hardly noticed spit as a new worst pain she had ever felt radiated from her nailed wrists around her bent arms and into her chest. She yelled and then sobbed. She thought he was feeling inside her cunt. She felt a cock go into her. He was twisting the needle that impaled her clitoris. I almost felt good among all the pain. She was sure he came into her.

As late afternoon, came it got hotter still. Una was sweating profusely and hat attracted the insects, lapping up her sweat. She shook her head to get them away from her eyes, but the agony that movement stimulated in her crossed wrists nailed behind her was too great. Better to tolerate them. More Romans were coming back to the camp after completing their patrols and of course they came to have a look and jeer at the barbarian whore on the cross. Many of them raped her. By lifting her cunt clear of the sedile the rapes were a brief relief from the painful pressure on her crotch. Occasionally a soldier approached her with a cup of liquid. Sometimes it was water; many times it was their urine. It was disgusting but Una was already well past caring and drank it anyway.

Vorenus idly watched his men taunting the crucified girl. This was the true horror of crucifixion. It wasn’t just the never ending pain, thirst and hunger, it was the audience constantly mocking and abusing the tortured girl. Vorenus had seen hundreds of crucifixions, possibly over a thousand in the last 10 years. And over 30 with his variation of the crux simplex. Una was strong and fit. She could last three or four days unless they ended her early. But he wasn’t going to give her mercy unless the order to decamp came from his superiors; and even if that happened they could still leave her behind alive suffering alone.

Just then Vorenus spotted Cormack the Gaul enter camp. He was a member of a Gaulish tribe that that had stayed loyal to Rome and he had proved very useful to Vorenus in gathering intelligence.

“You see that cunt on the cross over there? We picked her up this morning in an area she shouldn’t have been in. She might have useful information. I’d like you to interrogate her”

They walked over to Una. She was doing her rhythmic crux dance. Up and down her lacerated back scraped along the upright pole. At the furthest extent of her upward dance she gasped breath and groaned for about 20 seconds. Then she slipped awkwardly back down shuddering with pain only to repeat the dance move in another couple of minutes. And she would spend the rest of her miserable life doing that dance until she became too exhausted to do it. Then she would die if her infected wounds didn’t take her first. Vorenus wasn’t dismayed. He was proud that he had refined such an efficient means of dealing death by slow torture to the worst enemies of Rome.

Cormack had to try a couple of dialects before finding one that Una appeared to understand. He didn’t get much out of her. She repeated that her village had been burned and she was running away. She said she wasn’t a spy. Vorenus was inclined to believe her. It didn’t matter. The main purpose of crucifixion was political; as a means of putting terror in the hearts of a subject people. It didn’t matter if any particular victim of it was guilty or not. And a crucifixion of a young attractive woman was always good for troop morale.

“Cormack, translate this for me”

Voranus addressed Una on the cross. “You have been nailed for a few hours whore. I have placed a wager that you will last at least three days. I never lose such wagers. The pain and despair will only get worse. Your wounds will become infected. You will develop raging sweating fevers. But you are young and strong so none of that will kill you swiftly. I notice the insects are already bothering you on this hot day. I wager it will be hotter tomorrow. We will be smearing honey in and around your private parts and in your eyes. It will attract the insects particularly the wasps. If you think I have no pity for you, I have none. You die for the glory of Rome”

“Cormack, don’t bother to translate any reply. I am not interested”

As he walked away Voranus barked an order to Justinius “Put honey on the whore’s cunt, anus, breasts and eyes. Lots of it” then laughingly he added “Tell the men that if they want to fuck her, use the shaft of a lance otherwise their cocks might get stung”

The Next Day

Vorenus’s words had shocked Una. The constant struggle of trying to breathe meant she had other things to occupy her mind and she didn’t dwell on it. Sometime in the evening a soldier had smeared honey into her cunt and massaged it into her vulva, clitoris and anus. Honey was spread over her breasts. He put so much honey on her eyes she had problems seeing. During the cooling night it had tingled and she thought she felt ants marching over her private parts. As the new day came and the sun rose, the stinging insects came. As the day wore on her cunt and anus burned from the stings. She gulped down any drink she was offered by the soldiers even though it was often their piss. Despite the dehydration she felt a desperate need to piss but only a few drops would pass. It felt like she was pissing acid. Unfortunately that morning her anus discharged an almost constant stream of liquefied excrement which covered her legs and the sedile she was forced to straddle. When the flow finally stopped it was replaced by humiliating farts that amused the soldiers greatly.

Through the day soldiers brought her bowls of honey and milk to eat. It was pleasant to eat even though her throat was infected and it was becoming difficult to swallow. But like every kindness the soldiers showed her it was intended to increase her misery. The concoction eaten on a starving stomach caused terrible flatulence and a new stream of diarrhoea which now liberally coated her legs and feet. Una tried to angle her hips so that at least some of the offensive matter would miss her legs but the pain was just too great when she tried it. The only spare energy she had left would be devoted to the crux dance that allowed her to breathe. She wanted to die so badly but not badly enough to get her body to ignore the demand for air from her lungs.

The wasps came in the hottest part of the afternoon, a writhing mass covering her eyes, feasting themselves on the sweet honey and repeatedly stinging the girl underneath all that honey. Una went blind that afternoon. The only senses she had left were devoted to processing the pain and detecting violations of her cunt. The soldiers weren’t using their cocks to rape her any more but something far rougher and harder than any cock. Whatever it was it rubbing her passage raw.


The End

In the evening, Una heard but did not see the soldiers preparing to leave camp. Right through the night there were barked orders, the sounds of horses being readied and carts trundling. As the sounds dwindled near dawn she was given several cups of the sweetest cleanest water to drink. She drank and drank until she could drink no more. If she had understood Latin she would have understood the soldier joking to his comrade that this would keep the little whore going for at least another day after they had gone

By mid-morning the human hubbub of a Roman military camp had been replaced by the tranquil sounds of the wood and Una knew, knew with a terrible heart breaking certainty, that she was alone. They had not granted her mercy before they left but had left her to die all alone. The cruelty of it caused the girl to howl.

Later that day Una started shivering uncontrollably. The festering wounds caused by the spikes in her wrists and ankles were making her feverish. Despite the fever Una had enough strength to continue the crux dance by pushing up on her nailed ankles; and enough energy to endure the agony in her nailed wrists, twisted behind her back, to take a few gasps of air to keep her alive.

Her throat was now so swollen and sore that even had a soldier been there to offer her water, she couldn’t drink it. It was now a contest between dehydration, suffocation or gangrenous wounds as to which would kill her first. Whatever eventually killed her, Una won Vorenus’s wager for him. It was nearly another two days before Una died on the cross alone on the site of an abandoned Roman camp. Too bad there was no one there to say she had won it for him.
 
Part Two

Una on the cross

It was now done. Una was now crucified. Her crossed wrists were hoisted and nailed into position so far up her back that they almost reached the level of her shoulder blades, making it impossible to take full breaths and utterly agonising to do so. Desperate for air, Una pushed down on her nailed feet By doing so she swapped the agony shooting up her arms and into her chest with agony racing up her legs and into her crotch. But she also relieved the torment of the sedile pressing on her cunt. Until the time passed that it took to take some gasps of air. Then she dropped down to repeat the cycle in a little while. She could use together her nailed feet and nailed crossed wrists to raise herself. But then she had agony everywhere and she just couldn’t do it.

All Roman execution squads have the special things they like to do to their victims, to give it a personal touch. Vorenus’s squad was no different. Such as nailing the scrotum of male victims to the sedile. His signature embellishment of female victims was to pierce the clitoris with a blunt needle and to insert a slender blunted spikes through her breasts just behind her nipples, piercing the areola. This he now did to Una so didn’t seem to make much difference to her suffering which was already intense. Though the next time Una pushed up with her feet to breathe she found that the agony consumed her clitoris. As she performed her rhythmic almost involuntary dance on the cross, Una rubbed her raw back find torment in nerves exposed by her scourging. There was no position she could adopt where she was not in agony. She could only choose between competing agonies. She tried not to breathe so she would expire quickly but it didn’t work. Her traitorous body compelled her to suffer torment to breathe. She could not stop it.

You might think that was the end of the story but Una has just begun her journey towards death. It will take several days for her to die. She is surrounded by young lusty Roman soldiers who are looking forward to the show. They have seen young fit barbarian women crucified before and they will take pleasure from her. This is no breach of discipline. Vorenus expects his men to take their lust out on Una. It is part of the punishment. Rome expects it.

Day One

Una had been on the cross for 3 hours. The sun was high and it was very hot day She panted and her fair skin was burning. She noticed a young Roman soldier standing in front of her. His eyes were level with hers. Then she had to push up on her nailed feet to breathe and the worst pain she ever felt shot up her legs and into her cunt. He was holding a cup. He said something she didn’t understand. Did she want something to drink? Yes she wanted something to drink. She nodded vigorously. He held the cup to her lips. She drank. It was warm. It was urine. But she drank it anyway. He laughed and said something lewd to another soldier. He came close to her face still smiling and spat in her mouth. She hardly noticed spit as a new worst pain she had ever felt radiated from her nailed wrists around her bent arms and into her chest. She yelled and then sobbed. She thought he was feeling inside her cunt. She felt a cock go into her. He was twisting the needle that impaled her clitoris. I almost felt good among all the pain. She was sure he came into her.

As late afternoon, came it got hotter still. Una was sweating profusely and hat attracted the insects, lapping up her sweat. She shook her head to get them away from her eyes, but the agony that movement stimulated in her crossed wrists nailed behind her was too great. Better to tolerate them. More Romans were coming back to the camp after completing their patrols and of course they came to have a look and jeer at the barbarian whore on the cross. Many of them raped her. By lifting her cunt clear of the sedile the rapes were a brief relief from the painful pressure on her crotch. Occasionally a soldier approached her with a cup of liquid. Sometimes it was water; many times it was their urine. It was disgusting but Una was already well past caring and drank it anyway.

Vorenus idly watched his men taunting the crucified girl. This was the true horror of crucifixion. It wasn’t just the never ending pain, thirst and hunger, it was the audience constantly mocking and abusing the tortured girl. Vorenus had seen hundreds of crucifixions, possibly over a thousand in the last 10 years. And over 30 with his variation of the crux simplex. Una was strong and fit. She could last three or four days unless they ended her early. But he wasn’t going to give her mercy unless the order to decamp came from his superiors; and even if that happened they could still leave her behind alive suffering alone.

Just then Vorenus spotted Cormack the Gaul enter camp. He was a member of a Gaulish tribe that that had stayed loyal to Rome and he had proved very useful to Vorenus in gathering intelligence.

“You see that cunt on the cross over there? We picked her up this morning in an area she shouldn’t have been in. She might have useful information. I’d like you to interrogate her”

They walked over to Una. She was doing her rhythmic crux dance. Up and down her lacerated back scraped along the upright pole. At the furthest extent of her upward dance she gasped breath and groaned for about 20 seconds. Then she slipped awkwardly back down shuddering with pain only to repeat the dance move in another couple of minutes. And she would spend the rest of her miserable life doing that dance until she became too exhausted to do it. Then she would die if her infected wounds didn’t take her first. Vorenus wasn’t dismayed. He was proud that he had refined such an efficient means of dealing death by slow torture to the worst enemies of Rome.

Cormack had to try a couple of dialects before finding one that Una appeared to understand. He didn’t get much out of her. She repeated that her village had been burned and she was running away. She said she wasn’t a spy. Vorenus was inclined to believe her. It didn’t matter. The main purpose of crucifixion was political; as a means of putting terror in the hearts of a subject people. It didn’t matter if any particular victim of it was guilty or not. And a crucifixion of a young attractive woman was always good for troop morale.

“Cormack, translate this for me”

Voranus addressed Una on the cross. “You have been nailed for a few hours whore. I have placed a wager that you will last at least three days. I never lose such wagers. The pain and despair will only get worse. Your wounds will become infected. You will develop raging sweating fevers. But you are young and strong so none of that will kill you swiftly. I notice the insects are already bothering you on this hot day. I wager it will be hotter tomorrow. We will be smearing honey in and around your private parts and in your eyes. It will attract the insects particularly the wasps. If you think I have no pity for you, I have none. You die for the glory of Rome”

“Cormack, don’t bother to translate any reply. I am not interested”

As he walked away Voranus barked an order to Justinius “Put honey on the whore’s cunt, anus, breasts and eyes. Lots of it” then laughingly he added “Tell the men that if they want to fuck her, use the shaft of a lance otherwise their cocks might get stung”

The Next Day

Vorenus’s words had shocked Una. The constant struggle of trying to breathe meant she had other things to occupy her mind and she didn’t dwell on it. Sometime in the evening a soldier had smeared honey into her cunt and massaged it into her vulva, clitoris and anus. Honey was spread over her breasts. He put so much honey on her eyes she had problems seeing. During the cooling night it had tingled and she thought she felt ants marching over her private parts. As the new day came and the sun rose, the stinging insects came. As the day wore on her cunt and anus burned from the stings. She gulped down any drink she was offered by the soldiers even though it was often their piss. Despite the dehydration she felt a desperate need to piss but only a few drops would pass. It felt like she was pissing acid. Unfortunately that morning her anus discharged an almost constant stream of liquefied excrement which covered her legs and the sedile she was forced to straddle. When the flow finally stopped it was replaced by humiliating farts that amused the soldiers greatly.

Through the day soldiers brought her bowls of honey and milk to eat. It was pleasant to eat even though her throat was infected and it was becoming difficult to swallow. But like every kindness the soldiers showed her it was intended to increase her misery. The concoction eaten on a starving stomach caused terrible flatulence and a new stream of diarrhoea which now liberally coated her legs and feet. Una tried to angle her hips so that at least some of the offensive matter would miss her legs but the pain was just too great when she tried it. The only spare energy she had left would be devoted to the crux dance that allowed her to breathe. She wanted to die so badly but not badly enough to get her body to ignore the demand for air from her lungs.

The wasps came in the hottest part of the afternoon, a writhing mass covering her eyes, feasting themselves on the sweet honey and repeatedly stinging the girl underneath all that honey. Una went blind that afternoon. The only senses she had left were devoted to processing the pain and detecting violations of her cunt. The soldiers weren’t using their cocks to rape her any more but something far rougher and harder than any cock. Whatever it was it rubbing her passage raw.


The End

In the evening, Una heard but did not see the soldiers preparing to leave camp. Right through the night there were barked orders, the sounds of horses being readied and carts trundling. As the sounds dwindled near dawn she was given several cups of the sweetest cleanest water to drink. She drank and drank until she could drink no more. If she had understood Latin she would have understood the soldier joking to his comrade that this would keep the little whore going for at least another day after they had gone

By mid-morning the human hubbub of a Roman military camp had been replaced by the tranquil sounds of the wood and Una knew, knew with a terrible heart breaking certainty, that she was alone. They had not granted her mercy before they left but had left her to die all alone. The cruelty of it caused the girl to howl.

Later that day Una started shivering uncontrollably. The festering wounds caused by the spikes in her wrists and ankles were making her feverish. Despite the fever Una had enough strength to continue the crux dance by pushing up on her nailed ankles; and enough energy to endure the agony in her nailed wrists, twisted behind her back, to take a few gasps of air to keep her alive.

Her throat was now so swollen and sore that even had a soldier been there to offer her water, she couldn’t drink it. It was now a contest between dehydration, suffocation or gangrenous wounds as to which would kill her first. Whatever eventually killed her, Una won Vorenus’s wager for him. It was nearly another two days before Una died on the cross alone on the site of an abandoned Roman camp. Too bad there was no one there to say she had won it for him.
Great story, Lois!
 
Part Two

Una on the cross

It was now done. Una was now crucified. Her crossed wrists were hoisted and nailed into position so far up her back that they almost reached the level of her shoulder blades, making it impossible to take full breaths and utterly agonising to do so. Desperate for air, Una pushed down on her nailed feet By doing so she swapped the agony shooting up her arms and into her chest with agony racing up her legs and into her crotch. But she also relieved the torment of the sedile pressing on her cunt. Until the time passed that it took to take some gasps of air. Then she dropped down to repeat the cycle in a little while. She could use together her nailed feet and nailed crossed wrists to raise herself. But then she had agony everywhere and she just couldn’t do it.

All Roman execution squads have the special things they like to do to their victims, to give it a personal touch. Vorenus’s squad was no different. Such as nailing the scrotum of male victims to the sedile. His signature embellishment of female victims was to pierce the clitoris with a blunt needle and to insert a slender blunted spikes through her breasts just behind her nipples, piercing the areola. This he now did to Una so didn’t seem to make much difference to her suffering which was already intense. Though the next time Una pushed up with her feet to breathe she found that the agony consumed her clitoris. As she performed her rhythmic almost involuntary dance on the cross, Una rubbed her raw back find torment in nerves exposed by her scourging. There was no position she could adopt where she was not in agony. She could only choose between competing agonies. She tried not to breathe so she would expire quickly but it didn’t work. Her traitorous body compelled her to suffer torment to breathe. She could not stop it.

You might think that was the end of the story but Una has just begun her journey towards death. It will take several days for her to die. She is surrounded by young lusty Roman soldiers who are looking forward to the show. They have seen young fit barbarian women crucified before and they will take pleasure from her. This is no breach of discipline. Vorenus expects his men to take their lust out on Una. It is part of the punishment. Rome expects it.

Day One

Una had been on the cross for 3 hours. The sun was high and it was very hot day She panted and her fair skin was burning. She noticed a young Roman soldier standing in front of her. His eyes were level with hers. Then she had to push up on her nailed feet to breathe and the worst pain she ever felt shot up her legs and into her cunt. He was holding a cup. He said something she didn’t understand. Did she want something to drink? Yes she wanted something to drink. She nodded vigorously. He held the cup to her lips. She drank. It was warm. It was urine. But she drank it anyway. He laughed and said something lewd to another soldier. He came close to her face still smiling and spat in her mouth. She hardly noticed spit as a new worst pain she had ever felt radiated from her nailed wrists around her bent arms and into her chest. She yelled and then sobbed. She thought he was feeling inside her cunt. She felt a cock go into her. He was twisting the needle that impaled her clitoris. I almost felt good among all the pain. She was sure he came into her.

As late afternoon, came it got hotter still. Una was sweating profusely and hat attracted the insects, lapping up her sweat. She shook her head to get them away from her eyes, but the agony that movement stimulated in her crossed wrists nailed behind her was too great. Better to tolerate them. More Romans were coming back to the camp after completing their patrols and of course they came to have a look and jeer at the barbarian whore on the cross. Many of them raped her. By lifting her cunt clear of the sedile the rapes were a brief relief from the painful pressure on her crotch. Occasionally a soldier approached her with a cup of liquid. Sometimes it was water; many times it was their urine. It was disgusting but Una was already well past caring and drank it anyway.

Vorenus idly watched his men taunting the crucified girl. This was the true horror of crucifixion. It wasn’t just the never ending pain, thirst and hunger, it was the audience constantly mocking and abusing the tortured girl. Vorenus had seen hundreds of crucifixions, possibly over a thousand in the last 10 years. And over 30 with his variation of the crux simplex. Una was strong and fit. She could last three or four days unless they ended her early. But he wasn’t going to give her mercy unless the order to decamp came from his superiors; and even if that happened they could still leave her behind alive suffering alone.

Just then Vorenus spotted Cormack the Gaul enter camp. He was a member of a Gaulish tribe that that had stayed loyal to Rome and he had proved very useful to Vorenus in gathering intelligence.

“You see that cunt on the cross over there? We picked her up this morning in an area she shouldn’t have been in. She might have useful information. I’d like you to interrogate her”

They walked over to Una. She was doing her rhythmic crux dance. Up and down her lacerated back scraped along the upright pole. At the furthest extent of her upward dance she gasped breath and groaned for about 20 seconds. Then she slipped awkwardly back down shuddering with pain only to repeat the dance move in another couple of minutes. And she would spend the rest of her miserable life doing that dance until she became too exhausted to do it. Then she would die if her infected wounds didn’t take her first. Vorenus wasn’t dismayed. He was proud that he had refined such an efficient means of dealing death by slow torture to the worst enemies of Rome.

Cormack had to try a couple of dialects before finding one that Una appeared to understand. He didn’t get much out of her. She repeated that her village had been burned and she was running away. She said she wasn’t a spy. Vorenus was inclined to believe her. It didn’t matter. The main purpose of crucifixion was political; as a means of putting terror in the hearts of a subject people. It didn’t matter if any particular victim of it was guilty or not. And a crucifixion of a young attractive woman was always good for troop morale.

“Cormack, translate this for me”

Voranus addressed Una on the cross. “You have been nailed for a few hours whore. I have placed a wager that you will last at least three days. I never lose such wagers. The pain and despair will only get worse. Your wounds will become infected. You will develop raging sweating fevers. But you are young and strong so none of that will kill you swiftly. I notice the insects are already bothering you on this hot day. I wager it will be hotter tomorrow. We will be smearing honey in and around your private parts and in your eyes. It will attract the insects particularly the wasps. If you think I have no pity for you, I have none. You die for the glory of Rome”

“Cormack, don’t bother to translate any reply. I am not interested”

As he walked away Voranus barked an order to Justinius “Put honey on the whore’s cunt, anus, breasts and eyes. Lots of it” then laughingly he added “Tell the men that if they want to fuck her, use the shaft of a lance otherwise their cocks might get stung”

The Next Day

Vorenus’s words had shocked Una. The constant struggle of trying to breathe meant she had other things to occupy her mind and she didn’t dwell on it. Sometime in the evening a soldier had smeared honey into her cunt and massaged it into her vulva, clitoris and anus. Honey was spread over her breasts. He put so much honey on her eyes she had problems seeing. During the cooling night it had tingled and she thought she felt ants marching over her private parts. As the new day came and the sun rose, the stinging insects came. As the day wore on her cunt and anus burned from the stings. She gulped down any drink she was offered by the soldiers even though it was often their piss. Despite the dehydration she felt a desperate need to piss but only a few drops would pass. It felt like she was pissing acid. Unfortunately that morning her anus discharged an almost constant stream of liquefied excrement which covered her legs and the sedile she was forced to straddle. When the flow finally stopped it was replaced by humiliating farts that amused the soldiers greatly.

Through the day soldiers brought her bowls of honey and milk to eat. It was pleasant to eat even though her throat was infected and it was becoming difficult to swallow. But like every kindness the soldiers showed her it was intended to increase her misery. The concoction eaten on a starving stomach caused terrible flatulence and a new stream of diarrhoea which now liberally coated her legs and feet. Una tried to angle her hips so that at least some of the offensive matter would miss her legs but the pain was just too great when she tried it. The only spare energy she had left would be devoted to the crux dance that allowed her to breathe. She wanted to die so badly but not badly enough to get her body to ignore the demand for air from her lungs.

The wasps came in the hottest part of the afternoon, a writhing mass covering her eyes, feasting themselves on the sweet honey and repeatedly stinging the girl underneath all that honey. Una went blind that afternoon. The only senses she had left were devoted to processing the pain and detecting violations of her cunt. The soldiers weren’t using their cocks to rape her any more but something far rougher and harder than any cock. Whatever it was it rubbing her passage raw.


The End

In the evening, Una heard but did not see the soldiers preparing to leave camp. Right through the night there were barked orders, the sounds of horses being readied and carts trundling. As the sounds dwindled near dawn she was given several cups of the sweetest cleanest water to drink. She drank and drank until she could drink no more. If she had understood Latin she would have understood the soldier joking to his comrade that this would keep the little whore going for at least another day after they had gone

By mid-morning the human hubbub of a Roman military camp had been replaced by the tranquil sounds of the wood and Una knew, knew with a terrible heart breaking certainty, that she was alone. They had not granted her mercy before they left but had left her to die all alone. The cruelty of it caused the girl to howl.

Later that day Una started shivering uncontrollably. The festering wounds caused by the spikes in her wrists and ankles were making her feverish. Despite the fever Una had enough strength to continue the crux dance by pushing up on her nailed ankles; and enough energy to endure the agony in her nailed wrists, twisted behind her back, to take a few gasps of air to keep her alive.

Her throat was now so swollen and sore that even had a soldier been there to offer her water, she couldn’t drink it. It was now a contest between dehydration, suffocation or gangrenous wounds as to which would kill her first. Whatever eventually killed her, Una won Vorenus’s wager for him. It was nearly another two days before Una died on the cross alone on the site of an abandoned Roman camp. Too bad there was no one there to say she had won it for him.
You have a fine imagination!
 
Part Two

Una on the cross

It was now done. Una was now crucified. Her crossed wrists were hoisted and nailed into position so far up her back that they almost reached the level of her shoulder blades, making it impossible to take full breaths and utterly agonising to do so. Desperate for air, Una pushed down on her nailed feet By doing so she swapped the agony shooting up her arms and into her chest with agony racing up her legs and into her crotch. But she also relieved the torment of the sedile pressing on her cunt. Until the time passed that it took to take some gasps of air. Then she dropped down to repeat the cycle in a little while. She could use together her nailed feet and nailed crossed wrists to raise herself. But then she had agony everywhere and she just couldn’t do it.

All Roman execution squads have the special things they like to do to their victims, to give it a personal touch. Vorenus’s squad was no different. Such as nailing the scrotum of male victims to the sedile. His signature embellishment of female victims was to pierce the clitoris with a blunt needle and to insert a slender blunted spikes through her breasts just behind her nipples, piercing the areola. This he now did to Una so didn’t seem to make much difference to her suffering which was already intense. Though the next time Una pushed up with her feet to breathe she found that the agony consumed her clitoris. As she performed her rhythmic almost involuntary dance on the cross, Una rubbed her raw back find torment in nerves exposed by her scourging. There was no position she could adopt where she was not in agony. She could only choose between competing agonies. She tried not to breathe so she would expire quickly but it didn’t work. Her traitorous body compelled her to suffer torment to breathe. She could not stop it.

You might think that was the end of the story but Una has just begun her journey towards death. It will take several days for her to die. She is surrounded by young lusty Roman soldiers who are looking forward to the show. They have seen young fit barbarian women crucified before and they will take pleasure from her. This is no breach of discipline. Vorenus expects his men to take their lust out on Una. It is part of the punishment. Rome expects it.

Day One

Una had been on the cross for 3 hours. The sun was high and it was very hot day She panted and her fair skin was burning. She noticed a young Roman soldier standing in front of her. His eyes were level with hers. Then she had to push up on her nailed feet to breathe and the worst pain she ever felt shot up her legs and into her cunt. He was holding a cup. He said something she didn’t understand. Did she want something to drink? Yes she wanted something to drink. She nodded vigorously. He held the cup to her lips. She drank. It was warm. It was urine. But she drank it anyway. He laughed and said something lewd to another soldier. He came close to her face still smiling and spat in her mouth. She hardly noticed spit as a new worst pain she had ever felt radiated from her nailed wrists around her bent arms and into her chest. She yelled and then sobbed. She thought he was feeling inside her cunt. She felt a cock go into her. He was twisting the needle that impaled her clitoris. I almost felt good among all the pain. She was sure he came into her.

As late afternoon, came it got hotter still. Una was sweating profusely and hat attracted the insects, lapping up her sweat. She shook her head to get them away from her eyes, but the agony that movement stimulated in her crossed wrists nailed behind her was too great. Better to tolerate them. More Romans were coming back to the camp after completing their patrols and of course they came to have a look and jeer at the barbarian whore on the cross. Many of them raped her. By lifting her cunt clear of the sedile the rapes were a brief relief from the painful pressure on her crotch. Occasionally a soldier approached her with a cup of liquid. Sometimes it was water; many times it was their urine. It was disgusting but Una was already well past caring and drank it anyway.

Vorenus idly watched his men taunting the crucified girl. This was the true horror of crucifixion. It wasn’t just the never ending pain, thirst and hunger, it was the audience constantly mocking and abusing the tortured girl. Vorenus had seen hundreds of crucifixions, possibly over a thousand in the last 10 years. And over 30 with his variation of the crux simplex. Una was strong and fit. She could last three or four days unless they ended her early. But he wasn’t going to give her mercy unless the order to decamp came from his superiors; and even if that happened they could still leave her behind alive suffering alone.

Just then Vorenus spotted Cormack the Gaul enter camp. He was a member of a Gaulish tribe that that had stayed loyal to Rome and he had proved very useful to Vorenus in gathering intelligence.

“You see that cunt on the cross over there? We picked her up this morning in an area she shouldn’t have been in. She might have useful information. I’d like you to interrogate her”

They walked over to Una. She was doing her rhythmic crux dance. Up and down her lacerated back scraped along the upright pole. At the furthest extent of her upward dance she gasped breath and groaned for about 20 seconds. Then she slipped awkwardly back down shuddering with pain only to repeat the dance move in another couple of minutes. And she would spend the rest of her miserable life doing that dance until she became too exhausted to do it. Then she would die if her infected wounds didn’t take her first. Vorenus wasn’t dismayed. He was proud that he had refined such an efficient means of dealing death by slow torture to the worst enemies of Rome.

Cormack had to try a couple of dialects before finding one that Una appeared to understand. He didn’t get much out of her. She repeated that her village had been burned and she was running away. She said she wasn’t a spy. Vorenus was inclined to believe her. It didn’t matter. The main purpose of crucifixion was political; as a means of putting terror in the hearts of a subject people. It didn’t matter if any particular victim of it was guilty or not. And a crucifixion of a young attractive woman was always good for troop morale.

“Cormack, translate this for me”

Voranus addressed Una on the cross. “You have been nailed for a few hours whore. I have placed a wager that you will last at least three days. I never lose such wagers. The pain and despair will only get worse. Your wounds will become infected. You will develop raging sweating fevers. But you are young and strong so none of that will kill you swiftly. I notice the insects are already bothering you on this hot day. I wager it will be hotter tomorrow. We will be smearing honey in and around your private parts and in your eyes. It will attract the insects particularly the wasps. If you think I have no pity for you, I have none. You die for the glory of Rome”

“Cormack, don’t bother to translate any reply. I am not interested”

As he walked away Voranus barked an order to Justinius “Put honey on the whore’s cunt, anus, breasts and eyes. Lots of it” then laughingly he added “Tell the men that if they want to fuck her, use the shaft of a lance otherwise their cocks might get stung”

The Next Day

Vorenus’s words had shocked Una. The constant struggle of trying to breathe meant she had other things to occupy her mind and she didn’t dwell on it. Sometime in the evening a soldier had smeared honey into her cunt and massaged it into her vulva, clitoris and anus. Honey was spread over her breasts. He put so much honey on her eyes she had problems seeing. During the cooling night it had tingled and she thought she felt ants marching over her private parts. As the new day came and the sun rose, the stinging insects came. As the day wore on her cunt and anus burned from the stings. She gulped down any drink she was offered by the soldiers even though it was often their piss. Despite the dehydration she felt a desperate need to piss but only a few drops would pass. It felt like she was pissing acid. Unfortunately that morning her anus discharged an almost constant stream of liquefied excrement which covered her legs and the sedile she was forced to straddle. When the flow finally stopped it was replaced by humiliating farts that amused the soldiers greatly.

Through the day soldiers brought her bowls of honey and milk to eat. It was pleasant to eat even though her throat was infected and it was becoming difficult to swallow. But like every kindness the soldiers showed her it was intended to increase her misery. The concoction eaten on a starving stomach caused terrible flatulence and a new stream of diarrhoea which now liberally coated her legs and feet. Una tried to angle her hips so that at least some of the offensive matter would miss her legs but the pain was just too great when she tried it. The only spare energy she had left would be devoted to the crux dance that allowed her to breathe. She wanted to die so badly but not badly enough to get her body to ignore the demand for air from her lungs.

The wasps came in the hottest part of the afternoon, a writhing mass covering her eyes, feasting themselves on the sweet honey and repeatedly stinging the girl underneath all that honey. Una went blind that afternoon. The only senses she had left were devoted to processing the pain and detecting violations of her cunt. The soldiers weren’t using their cocks to rape her any more but something far rougher and harder than any cock. Whatever it was it rubbing her passage raw.


The End

In the evening, Una heard but did not see the soldiers preparing to leave camp. Right through the night there were barked orders, the sounds of horses being readied and carts trundling. As the sounds dwindled near dawn she was given several cups of the sweetest cleanest water to drink. She drank and drank until she could drink no more. If she had understood Latin she would have understood the soldier joking to his comrade that this would keep the little whore going for at least another day after they had gone

By mid-morning the human hubbub of a Roman military camp had been replaced by the tranquil sounds of the wood and Una knew, knew with a terrible heart breaking certainty, that she was alone. They had not granted her mercy before they left but had left her to die all alone. The cruelty of it caused the girl to howl.

Later that day Una started shivering uncontrollably. The festering wounds caused by the spikes in her wrists and ankles were making her feverish. Despite the fever Una had enough strength to continue the crux dance by pushing up on her nailed ankles; and enough energy to endure the agony in her nailed wrists, twisted behind her back, to take a few gasps of air to keep her alive.

Her throat was now so swollen and sore that even had a soldier been there to offer her water, she couldn’t drink it. It was now a contest between dehydration, suffocation or gangrenous wounds as to which would kill her first. Whatever eventually killed her, Una won Vorenus’s wager for him. It was nearly another two days before Una died on the cross alone on the site of an abandoned Roman camp. Too bad there was no one there to say she had won it for him.
Nice story. Thanks for posting it.
 
I like it, and for sure I will not stop you from writing other stories. If they are just as good, I love to read them.
 
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