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Apostate said:
He makes more than I do.
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So you're not a secretive billionaire posting here from his lair in St. Barts?:rolleyes:
Apostate said:
But I have never since that short story in Playboy read so much as a semicolon by Stephen King.
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He has some of the best semicolons around. His commas leave something to be desired though.:D But it's nice to finally meet someone who read Playboy for the articles.

Apostate said:
I don't do horror. Passing strange for a crux perv, but there you are.
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King has a fair amount of stuff that I wouldn't call horror. "The Shawshank Redemption" and "The Green Mile" to name a couple.
 
It took me a long time to finish it，and even used machine translation software for a more fluent reading.
I have to be fair to say that some parts of the story do not look logical.It happened, and it seemed a bit far fetched.
But these do not cover up its advantages.Love, suspense, pornography，you combine these elements well，and show a wonderful story for us.
This is a great story，no doubt.
I hope your new work will continue to work again.
（When I see the CCTV, my whole body is "PuHaHa!"）
 
hongzu117 said:
It took me a long time to finish it，and even used machine translation software for a more fluent reading.
I have to be fair to say that some parts of the story do not look logical.It happened, and it seemed a bit far fetched.
But these do not cover up its advantages.Love, suspense, pornography，you combine these elements well，and show a wonderful story for us.
This is a great story，no doubt.
I hope your new work will continue to work again.
（When I see the CCTV, my whole body is "PuHaHa!"）
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I accept that we took a few liberties, as is called in English "artistic license". I don't know if you have such a term in Mandarin.

The new story "Noosed Nude NYC" http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/noosed-nude-nyc.6749/ I think takes fewer such liberties, but we shall see :firedevil:

I thank you most sincerely for taking the time to read it in a language not your own and apprecate your comments. very much.
 
windar said:
I accept that we took a few liberties, as is called in English "artistic license". I don't know if you have such a term in Mandarin.

The new story "Noosed Nude NYC" http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/noosed-nude-nyc.6749/ I think takes fewer such liberties, but we shall see :firedevil:

I thank you most sincerely for taking the time to read it in a language not your own and apprecate your comments. very much.
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I can understand, and I like it very much. There is a feeling of watching classic criminal drama.
I hope your new work will create a new brilliance.
 
Dear Windar !

This whole story is damn well written and was exciting as hell for me :number_one:
So thank you very much for writing and posting it here :cool:))

I have read it in one trust, letting out the "blue print" for now, because i
wanted to read pure windar, nothing else, no other author, no comments
only pure story and i was VERY thankful, that this story was finished :cool:))

I started reading because i was interested in the cruxification itself, but
this was not the main aspect here an could have been anything else, a
stabbing, shooting, whatever, but is was a very well written crime story.

Thanks again Windar, your writing is really well done :cool:))
 
Dear @Barbaria1 ,

i have heard, that you are puzzled about my "reading style", so let me explain that:

Every single person has a very own style to write a story or render a picture, and i
was so much captivated by windar's writing, that i didn't want to get disturbed by
ANYTHING else, no comment, not even from windar himself, no graphic, nothing !!

I mentioned your "jumping in" as Barb (in blue) and said to me: "Oh well, that's
Barb herself - fine, so she's alive" and then went on with the "official version" seen
by Stan and had in mind to read the "blue print" AFTER the end of the story as a
nice and very private addon to the story, but seen from a very different point of
view. I strongly wanted to throw these two styles NOT together.

And in a third run i had in mind to read ALL, the whole adventure with ALL the
comments, so please, @Barbaria1 , did i make anything wrong ???

All the best
JackPott
 
Having read the whole story now, i'm deeply impressed about that 2 authors writing
and really surprised how well this fits together :cool:))

So here's my big thank you to this genius writing team and i'm now eager to read more :cool:))
 
JackPott said:
Having read the whole story now, i'm deeply impressed about that 2 authors writing
and really surprised how well this fits together :cool:))

So here's my big thank you to this genius writing team and i'm now eager to read more :cool:))
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I thank you for the kind words, though I really can't claim to be a genius. I'm working on being very stable at least. ;):p Barb and I just hope to amuse ourselves and if other are entertained, that's wonderful.

There are several other Stan and Barb stories here, with the further adventures of this wacky and kinky pair of detectives. We are also running a story currently, a spy caper in Occupied France, that you can find here http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/last-liaison-in-lyon.7609/
 
Madiosi said:
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“So you didn’t see or hear anyone in here?” Stan asked him.
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“Nope. The only one here was her and she didn’t make a sound.”
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Excellent work, Madiosi. One question though; why isn’t she naked? :rolleyes:
 
windar said:
Because she's wearing a loincloth:doh:

People who show too much interest in police matters become "persons of interest". You don't want to be interesting, do you?
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I assure you, Detective, my interests in this matter are purely prurient. :babeando:
 
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“We have a white female, obviously, young, probably around 20, not a virgin as you might guess.” Yang smiled at Stan. “Fingerprints don’t show up in the FBI database, nor in the ICE database of recent arrivals. So she’s likely American with no arrest record.”
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“Any semen?” Stan asked.
 
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“Three more years to full pension,” he thought as he drove slowly up to the station and waited for the crowd to part so that he could enter the parking area. “Shit, there’s that blond from Channel 7 and that guy Morton somebody-or-other from The Daily News.” He had tangled with them on a couple of recent cases and their sources were good, so he knew they knew he was point man on this one.
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As the crowd parted he could hear them shouting, “Detective Goldman? What can you tell us about the crucifixion?” He felt like shouting, “I don’t know any more than you do!” but thought the better of it. Jones would chew him out if he did that. That would be Reginald Jones, his boss, Chief of the Major Crime Unit, who, he was told by the young woman who manned the entry desk, wanted to see him right now.
 
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