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I find racist epithets uncomfortable to read.. maybe I’m a liberal snowflake.. but I think there’s a good reason why such language has been discarded by civilised people, and I don’t want to see it normalised again. Having said that, people are free to write what they want; I don’t have to like it.
 
All I can do is try to be an equal opportunity abuser;). I have stories in which white girls are abused by Asians and Africans (who do the same and worse to their own people) and ones in which girls of a variety of races are abused by whites. The common element, I suppose, is that the abusers are rich and powerful or are employed or manipulated by rich and powerful men. It is the power dynamic that is the most interesting I think.
I absolutely agree. It's just where you base that difference of power in your story and it can be wealth, gender, ethnicity, or anything people can conveniently believe to create such discrepancy of power.

To set a CF story in one of these situations, historically or dystopian, does not necessarily imply the author is racist.
Of course. How I can accuse such authors being a 'racist' while I'm writing a story in which white people owns Asian slave girls or call them as 'monkeys'? ;)

What I meant was when people write a BDSM story which has some historic or racial elements, they often use 'racial caricatures'. For instance, when people depict 'the Ottomans' in such a story, it's often the case that they take just the aspect that they love luxury and keep harems or slaves and such.

It could be either pure fantasy, or based on certain bias from the author. But it's difficult to tell which is which because there are in fact, prejudices of similar nature against similar people in real life.

Again, I don't think such stories are bad or that we shouldn't enjoy it. (I enjoy many such stories myself). It's just that being a non-European myself, it sometimes feel a bit jarring which in itself is not much of a big deal.

I find racist epithets uncomfortable to read.. maybe I’m a liberal snowflake.. but I think there’s a good reason why such language has been discarded by civilised people, and I don’t want to see it normalised again. Having said that, people are free to write what they want; I don’t have to like it.
Don't worry I perfectly understand. I'm sorry to hear that my story have such elements which make you feel uncomfortable. But it's not any different than the fact that I don't enjoy stories with certain themes (e.g. burning people at stake) without feeling anything against their authors.

As long as we both know that few people here is actual racist, I think we are all fine :)
 
As long as we both know that few people here is actual racist, I think we are all fine :)

I think that a discussion of such issues on a CF thread from time to time is a good thing. One of the nice things about the site is knowing that there are a good many thoughtful people here. :)
 
I think that a discussion of such issues on a CF thread from time to time is a good thing. One of the nice things about the site is knowing that there are a good many thoughtful people here. :)
Over the last two or three millennia, most so called civilised societies have been hierarchically structured. Each stratum of society tending to look down on and disparage those they consider to be beneath them in wealth and/or status. This in turn, has led to the the lowest stratum in one society looking to find a group in another which they themselves can regard as inferior, whether that is as a result of their colour, or behavioural patterns.
Many acts of sadistic cruelty can be a result of these phenomena.
 
I have a small question, by the way. From the looks of it, many of the stories in this site share a character named 'Barbara Moore' which seems to be a running joke of a kind, probably connected to the nick name of one of our admins.
She is a brunette, with a tight little ass, and a passing resemblance to the porn actress, Little Caprice.
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Chained By Fate - Part 6

Presently, the bell struck to announce the end of the feeding time, and they herded all the other slave girls back to their respective work shafts except us. One by one, the girls walked passed by my splayed body. Some looked down on me with pity, some with horror, and most others with emotionless indifference. It's something you see almost every day in this place, after all. As they walked by, 4931 kept her head low between my legs, despite the revolting smell. Probably she felt too ashamed to meet their gaze.

It took almost an hour for 4931 to finish her 'meal,' as Raisin made it sure that she wouldn't miss any spot. Her lips and tongue were instructed to run over every inch of my folded skin, picking up every last bit of the gruel hiding behind my wrinkles or sprinkled upon the bushes. After 4931 was made to clean up my butt crease and the dust-covered floor in a similar manner, Raisin finally ordered her to stop.

"I'll get you something to drink, dear," she said ominously and went to fetch a coffee pot. It wasn't plugged on because electricity is not something to be wasted in this mine, but you could still see faint steam escaping from its opening. She confirmed my apprehension by bringing the kettle to my glistening sex and poured the steaming water into its opening.

"AAAIIIIEEEEE!" I shoot my hip up and wailed as the water cooked my most sensitive skin.
"Shut up! The water wasn't even boiling, you wimp." Raisin reproached me coldly, as she filled me with hot water to the brim.
"Now, plug that hole and stand over here." She added with a menacing glance, "And if you spill even a single drop, I'll really boil that meat curtain of yours next time!"
"Yes, Ma'am." Holding my heated folds tightly together with both of my hands, I awkwardly stood up and waddled to my position.
"Good. And now you need to help me with some chores, dear. Masters told me to wash all the dishes after use here." She picked up a dish brush from a bucket, "But it would be easier for me if the bowl can clean itself, wouldn't it? Or should I do it myself?" She dipped the brush into the soapy water and raised its dripping disheveled head with thick plastic hairs to point at my sex.
"No, Ma'am!"
"Good girl. Now shake your ass!"
I began to throw my hip in random directions while shoving my hands between my legs. The few overseers who still remained in the hall noticed my performance and started to jeer.
Smack! As if to acknowledge their enthusiasm, Raisin gave me a hard slap across my butts with her brush, "Faster!"

I started to shake my whole body frantically, swaying and bouncing my hip in a ridiculous dance routine. The cheers got louder. A group of overseers walked into the hall and stopped to watch the spectacle. One of them, a thin blonde man who looks barely 20, produced a smartphone from his pants and started recording my performance. He talked to his colleagues with youthful enthusiasm, "Can you see that? I never thought such tiny udders could actually jiggle. I'm totally uploading this to my page!"
An older overseer, probably his superior, replied in a disinterested voice, "I've seen flatter ones. Some of these chinks almost look like males, you know."
"Some? Man, I say these bald monkeys are all so fucking ugly. You can't tell if one's a female or not without actually checking between its legs." A fat bearded man distorted his face with disgust as he spoke.

As they were talking, one of the overseers approached 4931, who was kneeling close to me. After inspecting her features with lustful eyes, he suddenly grabbed 4931's collar from behind and pulled her face upward. With her chin now forcefully raised up high, she turned her eyes to the side to avoid the gaze. I couldn't tell if she remembered my lesson or she was just too ashamed to meet his gaze while being inspected naked like that.

"But this one doesn't look that ugly, does it?" He pulled 4931's face towards his colleagues and asked, hoping to get their approval.
The thin blond overseer replied without looking, too busy with recording my dance to scrutinize 4931's features, "It's because you are such an animal lover, Ted. You'll certainly get sick someday if you keep putting your thing into these filthy beasts like that." He put his smartphone back into his uniform pocket and sneered, "Man, save your money and get some B grade pet, at least."
"Ok, ok. But you do that sometimes too, don't you?" Ted replied in an embarrassed voice. He looked at 4931's flushed face one last time, and pushed her collar away with feigned disinterest.

Now I was sweating profusely, and drops of sweat flew from my dust-covered breasts towards the overseers as I jiggled them hard. I quickly lowered my eyes as I sensed hatred filled gaze from the bearded overseer who cursed and spat on the ground. It landed on Raisin's greasy ponytail as she was kneeling close to their feet, lowering her head obediently. Despite her grade, she was a slave girl, after all.

The overseers soon lost their interest and walked past us to their seats. Raisin got up to her feet again. She wiped her hair with her hand and casually rubbed it upon the side of her hip. Even though she couldn't wash it very often - C grade girls got cleaned once every month, along with other furniture or equipment of the facility - she always took great care to keep her ponytail in shape. It was one of the very few things that distinguished her from all the rest of those 'bald monkeys' sharing her cursed blood.

"That's enough!" Raisin smacked my butts again - somewhat gentler than the last time - to relieve me of my ordeal. Nonetheless, she ordered 4931 to drink my water from the tap to which she complied without much resistance. I shuddered as her tender lips joined with mine, sucking what's left of the gruel from my heated womanhood into her body. Sweats were dripping from my hardened nipples into her flushed face, and I felt my breath become even more ragged as she was told to lick off the last drops from my folds.

After 4931 finished her task, we were finally allowed to go back to our gang. We barely could walk now - me from having to hold my legs up so long, and her from the shock of all the humiliation and degradation she suffered. I don't know how much time has passed since the feeding time ended. But there would be consequences, that's to be sure. I dragged my chains heavily with the apprehension.

I felt the chains tightening and heard the sound of 4931's painfully throwing up all she had to eat during her ordeal.

"Are you ok?" I turned back to her crouching figure and asked, as I put my hand gently over her shoulder. I sensed her trembling skin under my touch, probably not just from her upset stomach.

She raised her tearful eyes to my face, "How... how can you live like that?" and asked me in a broken voice.
"What do you mean?" I crouched down beside her and raised my thumbs to wipe her tears as I asked.
"They... they treat us like animals!" She protested as she flushed her face.
"But we are animals. Aren't we?"
"No! How can you say that?" She widened her eyes in shock.
"Just accept the fact. You can't do anything about it. It will feel better that way," I replied without emotion as I withdrew my hand from her face.
"But... but my father always told me we are all equals, regardless of our skin color."
"Maybe your father told you such a tale, just to make your Asian mother feel better."
"Don't talk about my parents like that! You don't even know them!" I could see a sudden flash of anger dancing inside her fiery brown eyes.
"Then you think you know what it is to be a slave girl? And how long have you been a slave? A week? Or a month at most?"
"I... I was a free woman until yesterday." Her confession even surprised me, but I tried not to show my emotion.
"Then you don't understand. And do you know how much I envied those white girls, their fair skins and golden hairs, whenever they taunted me for having such 'animal features'?"
"No, but......" Her eyes shook with conflicting feelings.
"You don't know because you look almost like them! Can you even imagine how many times I cursed my squinty eyes or this protruding mouth, or 'snout' as they call it?"
She opened her mouth to say something, but she just dropped her eyes to avoid my gaze. After a moment, she said in a weak voice, "I'm sorry."

I gathered myself up and looked down on her still crouching frame as I spoke, "We are just born that way, and we can't change that. We are born to serve our superiors, like how the females are born to serve the males and breed. That's the Law of Nature, like how they teach you at school."

She remained silent. I gave her chains a bit more forceful tug than usual, and spoke bluntly, "Come on, let's go."

We trudged our way back to our chamber without a word.

(To be continued...)
 
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Chained By Fate - Part 7

As soon as we returned to our work shaft, we prostrated ourselves at overseer Smith's feet, kissing his boots repeatedly for his mercy without avail. He promptly tied our wrist chains together and hung us to the wooden beam crossing the ceiling. Our stretched arms were pulled up until our toes could barely touch the ground.

The overseer released the chains from our shackles to tie our ankles together, my right ankle to 4931's left and vice versa. We were hung together facing opposite directions - my wide flat butts pressing against her heart-shaped bottom, my thick muscular arms against her long slender arms. He brought more loose chains from the box and tied them to each side of our legs, pulling them and attaching their ends to each pillar that supports the beam.

The walls and floors of this facility were littered with many ringed plates or posts, so the overseers could easily tie their slaves either for punishment or 'parking' wherever they were. In fact, after the Slavery Act which followed shortly after the Racial Purity Act, it became a common sight that those who still retained their citizenship dragging those who had lost it on the streets, naked by their leash. So I heard they have similar devices everywhere nowadays, including subway stations, restaurants, or restrooms. But I hadn't seen such a sight myself since I was sent to a training facility, then transferred to this mine shortly after they passed the Act.

I knew what was to come, and I felt truly sorry that she had to suffer it on the first day of her new life. Slave girls are whipped or lashed all the time, and it's just part of our lives. Work slaves like us, especially, don't regard getting whipped on our backs or butts while we work as 'punishment' because it's something we get every single day, and almost every hour. A rider doesn't 'punish' his horse by striking it with his riding crop because it's part of the relationship between a horse and its rider. So, neither they really 'punish' us by encouraging us to swing our pickaxes faster, with occasional whippings on our backs and butts.

If an overseer actually wants to punish us, and if he wants to use his whip rather than one of so many different clever but cruel methods, he typically goes for different targets. It's almost always on our breasts or between our legs that they administer their whippings or lashings for punishment, depending on the severity of the offence. It is because these are considered not only the most valuable parts of a slave girl's body but also very the essence of her existence - a slave can serve her purpose without a brain, but without her sex, she is absolutely nothing. There is a reason why she is called a 'cunt' because that is what she truly is.

Even then, he rarely bothers to bind us for the purpose unless we do something really foolish - like failing to return to our post after a meal, for example.
It is one of the very first things that every slave girl learns how to present her breasts or sex for punishment in many different positions. So her owner rarely needs more than issuing a single command, and a well-trained girl knows how to keep her legs open even when leather strikes her most sensitive skin.

"You know you deserve this, cunt," the overseer remarked coldly, as he unfastened his braided whip. Its polished surface ominously reflected the dim light as its tail uncoiled to the ground.

"This stupid slave doesn't deserve to live, Master. It can only be grateful if its owner decides to spare its worthless life, and correct its ways to serve him better, Master." I said what was expected by the ritual, and tensed my body for the inevitable blow. All the other girls kept busily digging through their walls, pretending not to hear our conversation.

The overseer paced a few steps back and rolled up his sleeves. I could feel 4931's ragged breathing from my back, her fear almost palpable now. Clang, clang, clang, regular beatings of steel against the glistening wall were all I could hear. The overseer raised his arm high and took a careful aim.

CRACK!! Following a rustling noise, a fiery pain exploded on my left breast. My back arched backward and twisted as I fought my urge to scream.
"One. Thank you, Master!" I counted through groans.

Another rustling noise, then another explosion on my right breast. CRACK! He had impressive precision with his aim.
"...TWO! Thank you, Master!" I twisted my body in the opposite direction and cried.

And another CRACK! This time the leather fell across my chest, brutally crushing both of my breasts.
"Ummph!..... THREE! Thank you, Master!" I counted through my teeth and groaned.

He changed his stance and flexed his muscles, let the leather flying sideways this time. The vicious leather landed on my breasts far from its tip, sending its tail wrapping under my hairy armpit to hit 4931's ample breast from the side.

"AAIIIEEEE!!"
"AHHH! FOUR! THANK YOU, MASTER!"

We both jumped and writhed our bodies in pain. 4931 probably never even imagined people can beat a woman's tender body so savagely before. But this is not the world she knew, and she is not a human being anymore.

"I love it when I hit two birds with a single stone," he grinned cruelly and took his next aim, "Let's see if I can do it again."

With an underhanded swing, he let his whip flying close from the ground like a snake. Finally, it raised its vicious tail to catch the dead center of 4931's exposed womanhood across my densely covered slit. Our bodies simultaneously jolted upwards, and I could no longer suppress my scream.

"AAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGG!!"
"AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!...FI... FIVE!! Thank you... Master."

4931's beastly wail pierced my ears, and I joined her with my hysteric cry, as I felt tearing pain on my already abused sex. At that moment, I cursed my feminity as much as my blood. It is because I have a cunt that I am a cunt. And as long as I am a cunt, I have to suffer because the primary function of a cunt, aside from pleasuring men, is to be whipped, beaten, stretched, torn, burned, humiliated, and degraded. That is why we, cunts, exist in this world.

The overseer strode towards me and roughly grasped my breasts to examine the marks. Blood began to form a scattered pattern where the skin broke, and the angry red color of the welts gave a good contrast against dull reddish tint of old stripes that were crisscrossing under thick layers of dust.

Satisfied with his aim, he walked around my body to face 4931. She began to tremble uncontrollably, as he started to trace her curves with the polished leather.
"You've never really been whipped before, have you?" he spoke as he slowly drew circles around her trembling nipples as if to mark his target.
"N...N...No...Ma... Master." She stammered pitifully, as her whole body violently shuddered with fear.

Suddenly I felt her buttocks tensing as she jolted her body with a moan. With his probing fingers spreading her welted folds to gain access to her opening, the overseer brought his face close to 4931's ear and whispered, "Don't worry, sweetie. I promise I'll try not to damage your precious box too much this time." He pressed his thumb upon her feminine center and rubbed it in a slow circular motion, drawing another moan from her trembling lips.

He suddenly pulled her hip forward with his clawed fingers from inside, making her gasp audibly. "A tight one like this doesn't last long in this place, you know." He slipped his glistening fingers out and whispered, "So it would be a pity if it gets ruined before everyone has a chance to taste it, wouldn't it?" He cleaned his fingers by smearing them upon 4931's face and turned away. As he walked to the proper spot to deliver his strikes, I heard the sound of her stream hitting the floor.

Even before she finished relieving herself, the first strike viciously crushed her milky white breasts, drawing an unearthly scream from the poor girl. I felt warm liquid branching from her trembling thighs to my legs. He kept beating her virgin breasts a blow after blow, giving her first essential lesson as a slave girl that her breasts are not there to be cuddled but to be whipped and flogged.

We got five more strikes each before the next break began. But as soon as it was over, the whole process started again, and the overseer played us like an instrument with his skillful strikes, making us sing and dance of misery and pain. When the cycle repeated the third time, 4931 was no longer able to count her strikes, but she just kept squealing and wailing like a pig each time the whip leaves a new mark on her ravaged body.

Despite her frantic screams, however, I somehow felt he didn't hit her as hard as he hit me. I can only imagine that he didn't want to see a slave girl of such a rare breed - at least for a D grade one - to expire too quickly before he could fully enjoy what she has to offer. Of course, he didn't mind as much, either shredding pitifully tiny udders of an easily replaceable Polynesian breed or damaging its already half-ruined sex beyond repair. So it wasn't long after that I began to drift in and out of my consciousness from his cruel beatings while bleeding, and peeing from my torn and swollen sex.

The rest of the day was a blur, and I can't remember many details after that. It was only when the day was over, and overseers were securing the girls for the night that we were allowed to join our gang again.

As soon as they released us from our chains, we collapsed on the ground, like a Marionette cut off from its lines. Without allowing us time to stretch our stiffened joints, they roughly grabbed our arms and chained them together from behind. Then we were ordered to lie on our back and pull our knees up so that they can connect our collar to the ankle shackes with short chains.

The overseers moved from a girl to the next one, efficiently securing them in such a tight and vulnerable position. Bound as such, a girl cannot move her body or hide her exposed sex from scrutiny. It makes it safer for them to be left unattended during the night, or to be examined easily if any overseer happens to visit them to pick one with the best condition among them for personal use.

Soon the overseers withdrew to their quarters, and the electricity was cut off. The complete darkness reigned the entire mine, hiding so shamelessly exposed flowers of the girls, leaving only their fragrance in the air. This was the only time I didn’t feel so exposed and vulnerable anymore. Feeling a soothing breeze upon my throbbing sex, I closed my eyes, allowing my tormented mind a blissful respite.

(To be continued...)
 
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While I could come up with enough ideas to write the next episode, I’d like to talk about my own preferences regarding BDSM stories, so you could have better ideas as to what to expect and my motivations in writing this story.

In my case, I am less - if at all - attracted to physical pain but much more so to psychological humiliation and degradation of women. So, it is unlikely you will see scenes involving an extreme torture like the case with many stories from some of other great authors here. It will probably involve a reference to such an excruciating torment and death as the plot needs it, but I will not describe all its gory details.

In fact, I am a bit afraid if my description of the intense whipping scene in my last episode was rather dull or unconvincing compared with so many excellent examples you can read from this community. I love the idea of a slave getting mercilessly whipped, but it’s more of such psychological aspects that a female’s delicate and private body parts are subjected to such an abuse, or that she is reminded of her place by being forced to suffer in public and bear the marks of her lesson than of the actual physical agony that appeals to my taste in such a fantasy.

On the other hand, I prefer more extreme kinds of psychological degradation to consensual or erotic stories. For example, I love it when there is more than just some impulsive lust or personal contempt that makes them abuse or humiliate women. For example, when a Roman soldier harasses a naked prisoner girl, it’s mainly just that he has such a personality to abuse helpless girls and that the society permits it.

But I love it more when there are more systematic and fundamental reasons why those girls should be treated that way. Gorean fantasy could be a good example of this, because in that world you can see there are many explicit laws and social conventions regarding how a slave girl should be treated which constitutes a system that sees her as a property or an animal.

I think such settings can be exploited to provide a much more engaging and extreme kinds of degradation and humiliation for women. If you happen to become a criminal and abused by an unruly soldier, it’s just an unfortunate incident that you have fallen to such a misfortune.

But if there is a whole system which defines who you are, whom you are inferior to, how you are supposed to serve your superiors, or what protocol should be followed when you are punished or sold, and so on, it can feel much more hopelessly degrading a situation because the whole world condemns you as a lowly animal and a mere commodity. And the abuse or humiliation you get from your superiors could feel more degrading when it is done in a casual manner as if it was something you deserve by nature.

As such, I wanted to imagine a Gorean-esque society with institutionalized slavery. But as I mentioned above, I’m not much into consensual or erotic kinds of a D/s relationship personally. So what I did was replacing such elements from the Gorean world with something else that can strengthen the reasons why those poor slaves girls should get despised and treated as lowly animals. And I found that the racial elements could serve perfectly for such a purpose. In society where such extreme kinds of prejudice is accepted as a norm, people don’t regard slave girls as animals because it excites their lust, but they do so because they truly believe it.

I hope this could help people understand my motives better and hopefully, enjoy my story more.

Thanks! :)
 
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By the way, attached here are couple of drawings from Tibool's 'The Mine' collection that depict the sleep position, which I tried to describe with my limited English skills in my previous episode. The only difference is that a girl's hands are also chained behind her back in my story, to prevent her from doing things like tampering with her padlocks, hurting other girls, or touching herself and so on.

Now I was reminded that I could have said their legs were 'drawn' close to their chest instead, to convey more accurate image. As I cannot edit the post anymore (at least until I finish the whole story and revise them later) I'll use these images to give you clearer idea of the way my slave girls are supposed to spend the night.
 

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Now I was reminded that I could have said their legs were 'drawn' close to their chest instead, to convey more accurate image. As I cannot edit the post anymore (at least until I finish the whole story and revise them later) I'll use these images to give you clearer idea of the way my slave girls are supposed to spend the night.

My brain instantly translated your original description to the Tibool depictions, so do not worry so much, your descriptions are very good.

But if there is a whole system which defines who you are, whom you are inferior to, how you are supposed to serve your superiors, or what protocol should be followed when you are punished or sold, and so on, it can feel much more hopelessly degrading a situation because the whole world condemns you as a lowly animal and a mere commodity.

You are not alone in thinking like this. In an old story of mine Sats-----slave Assessment Tests girls are graded from slavebeasts (the lowest) to slavegirls (the highest) much like your D to A.
 
Chained by Fate - Part 8

Droning hum of snoring and unconscious groans began to permeate the blackness of the night, as the girls gradually embrace the welcoming rest. Despite being bound in such an uncomfortable position on the cold hard ground, most of the girls didn't take too long before they fell asleep. Being so extorted our physical and mental energy to its last drop every day, losing sleep was not a luxury that we could afford.

Moreover, the overseers typically spread the girls at regular intervals at night, as far as the space permits. It was mainly to make it easier for them to visit each girl without bumping into another one, either for inspection or personal use. But it was also because the distance would make it difficult for the girls to talk with each other, even when there is no overseer to enforce the rule. Driven to exhaustion and forbidden to talk, most girls learn how to fall asleep as soon as their legs are drawn up and chained for the night.

"Are you sleeping?" a low, whispering voice of 4931 brought back my drifting mind to the unpleasant reality. Throbbing pain on my ravaged breasts and womanhood gradually returned with my consciousness. With our collars connected with a short chain, they placed us closer to each other than other girls.

"Please... We both need to sleep. Take some rest, and let's talk tomorrow, ok?" Trying to hide my irritation, I answered her with a tired voice.
"I am sorry."
"......"
I turned my face towards her, but I could not see her expressions. Dim lightbulbs sparsely hung along the power line were the only source of light in these underground tunnels. So you could not even see your own hands when they cut off the electricity.
"I am sorry that you suffered so much because of me," 4931 whispered in my direction with a soft but assuring voice, "I promise I will try not to make any more mistakes."
"It's ok. I get whipped like that all the time." I answered her casually, feigning indifference.
"I still don't believe I deserve this - no one deserves this, which includes you." 4931 took a deep breath and continued, "But I will try to be a good slave if it will save you from being punished for my foolish mistakes."
"That was... very sweet of you. Thanks."
We both remained silent for a while, listening to the cacophony of occasional grumblings and constant snoring of the unconscious girls.

Feeling her image changing its color to a somewhat less annoying shade in my mind, I subsequently broke the silence and asked, "Who are you?"
"I am cunt four-nine-..." she began to recite her numbers as if to prove her resolution.
"No, who are you, really?"
She fell silent again.

"Mixed breeds... sorry, those girls who have a white parent don't normally end up here without some serious defects, and you don't seem to have any." I pressed her for an answer. A fleeting image of her perfect milky white breasts flashed in my mind.
"And I've never seen any slave girl sent straight to this hell without even getting any training before. What horrible thing have you done to warrant all these things, really?" I wanted an answer to all the mysteries and intrigues I felt of her ever since I met her this morning.
"My name... is Barbara Moore." She answered as if she was confessing a murder.
"You mean like General Moore, 'The Savior' Moore?" I lifted my head in surprise. The chains connecting our necks rattled on the cold hard floor.
"Yes, he is... was my father." She replied calmly but with unmistakable sadness in her voice.
"I am sorry... And I'm sorry for what I said about your parents too."
"That's ok."
Once again, we returned to our respective reverie in darkness.

General Moore was a renowned general whom people once hailed as a national hero. When the United Asian Nations invaded our country and overwhelmed our unprepared frontline regiments, it was General Moore's brilliant strategy that saved the day. He managed to delay their army, which was marching to our capital, earning precious time for our main forces to mount a counter-attack. The feat earned him his nickname 'The Savior,' but his fame proved to be short-lived. After the war turned into a stalemate, he was condemned as a 'UAN conspirator' and suffered a public execution along with his wife just a few months ago.

Of course, we don't watch television or browse the internet when we are not too busy digging those coal deposits in chains. Still, his execution was such a big public event that I heard many overseers talking about it later. I don't know many details, but they said his 'Asian bitch' was a UAN agent who manipulated the general to sabotage our war effort.
I remember the overseers gathered in the Feeding Hall to watch a live stream of the execution. The general confessed that he negotiated with the enemy to help her wife return to UAN after she completed her mission. Video clips of their chopping off his male member, or of him forced to watch her naked wife getting gang-raped and brutally whipped on all her female parts before a cheering audience became viral both inside and outside this facility.

"Then, how did you become a slave?" I asked her my biggest question.
"I... I don't know. My father sent me to a boarding school in South Africa when things started to get worse here. I couldn't hear much news about the country since until they... they killed my father on TV." Her voice trembled and broke into a sob.

I wish my hands were free, so I could hold her and console her right now. But all I could do was wait for her to calm herself enough to continue her story.
"...So, I hurried to return home. But as soon as I landed at the airport, I was surrounded by soldiers, and they drugged me."
She finally gathered herself again to continue her story, "And when I woke up, I found myself completely naked with all my hair was gone. And to my horror, my breasts were branded with these strange numbers."
"I couldn't move because my hands and feet are tied behind my back, and couldn't scream as my mouth was gagged... gagged with my own underwear! It was the only clothes I was wearing before they kidnapped me that still remained on my body." She raised her voice in agitation as she relived her traumatic memory.

From what we had suffered together, it couldn't be her worst memory since she learned the cold embrace of iron around her neck. Nevertheless, it must be very painful to recall how she had fallen from a lovable daughter of a national hero to the lowest among the slave girls in such a short time.

"Please lower your voice, Barbara. You will wake other girls if you shout like that." I called 4931 by her name to calm her down.
"Oh, I'm sorry. Anyway, I think it was inside a truck that I found myself like that. When it stopped, the overseers came in and dragged me down to this place. The rest you already know." She let out a deep sigh.
"But why did you return at all? Wouldn't it be safe if you had remained in South Africa?"
"They didn't kill my mother, did they?"
"What do you mean? They showed it on TV that..."
"I know that! I know... I saw... what they did to my mother. But they didn't actually show how they killed my mother, Right?" She probably needed my assurance than opinion. So I remained silent.

I remembered the miserable wailings of her mother when I caught a glimpse of her video from an overseer's smartphone while I was working. The camera panned from her panic-stricken face to her naked body and then to the cheering audience. She was lying on a small block with her arms and legs stretched out by the firm hands of the soldiers on each side.
The host read a long list of the crimes this general's 'Asian bitch' committed against the country, as a soldier led a large muscular labrador to the stage. The camera lewdly zoomed upon the woman's crotch as they stretched her with their fingers for the glistening column of the beast. They split the screen in half to show both the general's and his wife's faces in one shot - one trembling white with anger, the other with unspeakable shame and fear.
The audience applauded and cheered as the beast finally began to hump her on its own. Subsequently, they began to blast the woman's breasts from each side with a lash, forcing her to gyrate her hip to match the beast's movements. With each new stripe and each assault on her ravaged body, she writhed, wailed in misery and pain.
I couldn't watch it anymore because I got my own stripes on my breasts soon, from the overseer who noticed my interest in his smartphone. But I believe that was the last moment of her torment they broadcasted on TV.

I almost wished her hope of seeing her mother would be in vain, being unable to imagine what they would have in store for her if they spared her life for even more torments. I didn't want to torture her by reminding her of what she must have seen herself.
"I don't know. I wasn't allowed to watch the execution. I'm a slave, you know."
"And, so am I, it seems." She said as if her new status created her a special bond with me.

"My mother, she would be a slave like us if she is alive. Wouldn't it?" She asked me warily.
"Probably, yeah. But I'm sorry. I don't want to give you any false hope, Barbara. If she became a slave, she would definitely be a D-graded one like us. And there are few places where an old D grade slave could last more than a month."
"What does the grade mean? And why are you sure she would get the D grade?"
"You surely don't know anything, do you?" I shook my head and sighed at her innocent ignorance.
"When I was young, I lived near a military camp where my father was deployed. I played with the kids from other military families. I was the only Asian kid in town, but they didn't say anything bad about it."
"Because you look like them, and your father was a superior officer to their parents?" I pointed her out the uncomfortable fact.
"Probably, yeah. I didn't think of it that way until now. But after the war broke out, my mother was no longer allowed to eat with us in the same restaurant. And that was when my father decided o send me off to South Africa. I don't know much about how things went here after that."
Traitor or not, General Moore must have been a great father for her. I felt pity that she had to lose her father in such a horrible way.
"Ok, I'll just tell you about the basics, so that you won't get us into trouble again."
"I'm listening."
I felt my throat was parched, so I rolled my tongue inside my mouth to collect saliva and swallowed. She has so much to learn.
"First and foremost, as a slave girl, we must show our absolute obedience and respect at all times to our owners."
"Who are our owners?"
"It depends. Most D-graded girls belong to a facility or the government itself. So we just regard all who work for this mine as our owners, and call them our 'Master.' But if you see a free man or woman from outside the facility, you can call them 'Sir' or 'Ma'am' respectively. Got it?"
"I think so. Even though I still don't feel it's ok to treat a person like she's a property."
"Barbara..." I shook my head and sighed in the darkness.
"Fine! I'm sorry. I can play a good slave if that is what's needed to survive. What are grades anyway?"
"There are four different classes of slaves here. And we are also expected to show our obedience and respect other slaves who have a higher grade than us."
"Like Raisin?"
"Yes, like Raisin. And pretty much everyone else, because we are the lowest among them."
"Why we got the lowest grade?"
"I have no idea why you didn't get a higher grade, Barbara. But in my case, I believe it was because I trace my ancestry to former Indonesia mostly. They say girls from those Polynesian regions have the most 'animal-like features' among the Chinks."
"That's a bad word! Why do you call yourself as that?" She raised her voice in protest.
"Would you feel better if you are called a 'cunt' instead? Chinks, Gooks, yellows, bitches, sluts, cunts, it doesn't matter. We are what our owners call us to be, and it's just that they see us mostly as monkeys here."
"So, it's all about ethnicity?"
"Not exactly. But for now, let's just say when you look like a Polynesian girl, you'll likely end up among the D-grade girls unless you look exceptionally pretty."
"But my mother's family came from former China. So why would she get a D grade?"
"It is because she is old, and also married to a convicted traitor." I felt guilty when I spoke my the last word.
"What happens when a higher grade slave gets old?"
"Only a few slaves have a chance to get old, Barbara. And if they do, they will eventually all become D-graders like us. Those D-grade facilities are where they dump all the useless girls to dispose of them. It's mostly mines, quarries, or construction sites that buy those disposable girls and grind them until they die."
"That is cruel!" Barbara protested.
"But when you get the D grade, you are no longer considered a human being and totally disposable. So our owners won't even give you medicine if you collapse at work. It'll be cheaper for them to get another D girl than to waste those pills on an under-producing slave."
"I don't like it at all. But what about other grades? Raisin was a C grade girl, right?"
"Right. But, listen, Barb. We really need to sleep and save our strength for tomorrow." I blinked my heavy eyelids and replied warily.
"Alright. But I think I need to pee."
"I'll teach you that tomorrow. But if you are full, you can just relieve now."
"What? It's gross! What if it flows to other girls?" Barbara objected in shock.
"They won't care, and soon you wouldn't too. Believe me. It's much better to relieve at night than in front of an overseer. Just arch your back a bit so you won't hit your own face."
"Why do I have to do that in front of them?"
"Because you need permission for everything when you are a D-grade girl."
"Still, that's gross."
"All girls do it because it will dry up in the morning, so the overseers will never know."
"I'll just try to sleep then."
"Ok, then I'll teach you how to beg for permission to relieve tomorrow. Good night, Barb."
"Good night."

I heard rustling noise of her chains dragging over the ground. Barbara probably was constantly shifting her body in a vain hope to find a bit more comfortable spot to sleep. Every girl experiences such difficulty at first, sleeping while chained like an upturned turtle and pressing her bare naked back upon the ragged stone floor. But soon, they cease to care, like how they come to see peeing naked in front of men as an ordinary part of their lives.

Suddenly, the clanking noise of the chains stopped, and Barbara's voice reached my ears through the darkness.

"What is your name?"
"It's two-seven-six-three. You can read it from my breast, you know."
"No, I mean your really name."
"...It's Siss. Weird, is it?" I hesitated a bit before I answered. It felt so weird to pronounce my name after so many years.
"I like it. It sounds like 'sis,' and I always wanted to have a big sister." Barbara replied, almost happily.
"We really need to sleep now, Barb."
"Ok. Good night, Siss."
"Good night, Barb."

Soon, I heard a hesitant stream shyly splashing on the ground nearby. I closed my eyes and smiled faintly in the darkness, probably the first time since I have worn my collar.

(To be continued...)
 
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Just started writing my next episode and I'm afraid that it may contain such elements that could make my story even less popular than it currently is. I know that description of urine or excrement would be an instant 'turn-off' for many as much as such strong racial elements in my story. But I have to follow my personal dark imagination and twisted perversions to write this story.

So, please bear with me if I lead my characters into a bit more uncomfortable alley for you with my next episode.
 
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I just did a 'quick & dirty' search for the word excrement appearing anywhere in posts, and about 200 references appeared. Stop fretting.
That's certainly encouraging... but you'll see my reasons for apprehension soon enough :p

On a side note, I also changed minor settings in an inconsistent manner in my upcoming episode and more similar changes possibly come in future. Now the slaves have short chains dangling from their collars which can be used as a leash, or for securing them to their shackles for the night.

And I'm not too happy with my description of how my main characters walked to the Feeding Hall by themselves also. It was needed for the private moments they shared, but I don't think they would let the girls move around like that in such an environment. I'm still undecided what to do with it, as changing that setting would also affect the whipping scene as they were punished for returning late from their feeding.

At any rate, I'll try to correct such inconsistencies when I'm done with the story later.
 
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