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lai

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De nada.

If you like bleumune and haven’t seen this thread already, you’ll have a ball with

Thank you v much!!! your right AWESOME THREAD!!
 

lai

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I've done so many scenes in The Serpent's Eye that would fit here. The scenes where Sabina was whipped on the cross were particularly obscene since they depicted sexual torture.

Gundericus, the executioner's helper, swings the whip. Sabina was helpless to protect her soft round breasts and swelling nipples from the searing strokes of the whip that came inexorably, one after the other. In this picture, she has twisted her hips away from him and her legs are together in an effort to protect her porcella from him, knowing that it's only a matter of time until he will whip her down there, too.

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From this angle it's easier to see her twisted hips and closed legs:

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But the agony in her breasts, the whip leaving burning, bleeding welt on top of welt, builds until it is beyond bearing. She has only one option to try to draw his attention away from them, if only for a few precious moments. In desperation, she spreads her legs wide, thrusts her hips forward and forces herself to turn them more toward him, presenting her soft labia, clitoris, vagina, everything, fully exposing and offering them to the whip.

Will the sacrifice she offers be enough to turn the whip away from her burning, throbbing breasts? Her body trembles as she struggles to hold herself open for what must be coming.


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Her face is turned away from Gundericus so she won't have to watch; if she sees the whip coming she knows she can't control herself. Her legs will close on their own, she'll never be able to hold them open, and she has to, this is her only choice. But she can't stop her eyes from being drawn toward him in horror.

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When the knots of the whip strike, driving into the soft flesh of her cleft, the most sensitive part of her body, the stinging, searing pain forces the air from her lungs in a wild, helpless scream. Her hips jerk backward reflexively in an effort to escape the source of her agony. Shaking, she pulls helplessly against the nails in her wrists and feet as her tortured body twists and writhes.

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is this series anywhere ??? older tech but looks awesome!
 

lai

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They were done as illustrations for "The Serpent's Eye" but there were many more renders than I could use in the story. A lot of them are here: https://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/jedakks-masterpiece.4731/
just curious besides serpant and the other renders being a masterpiece!!!!

why isnt there final renders of the last day , 4th and 5th day , the final agonizing 48 hrs and the subsequent appearance & handling of the corpse

just curious your work is a masterpiece again i have to say

Huge Fan
lai
 

jedakk

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why isnt there final renders of the last day , 4th and 5th day , the final agonizing 48 hrs and the subsequent appearance & handling of the corpse
I haven't looked at it in a long time, but I believe there were only four days on the cross. I had the first day, the night, next morning, then there's the whipping on the cross, which I think was actually the third day. I didn't feel like showing her as a corpse at the time, so I didn't illustrate that. When I did a lot of those illustrations, between 2009-2015, it took a lot of time to render them so I didn't have the time to do illustrations for every moment of the story.
 

lai

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understood i was curious
awesome work Sir!! had to cross my legs and at my age thats a blessing
thank you for that
i do hope in future works those last 48hrs and subsequent handling disposal are considerations for you
many many fans such as me that lust for that

HUGE FAN!!
lai
 

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I haven't looked at it in a long time, but I believe there were only four days on the cross. I had the first day, the night, next morning, then there's the whipping on the cross, which I think was actually the third day. I didn't feel like showing her as a corpse at the time, so I didn't illustrate that. When I did a lot of those illustrations, between 2009-2015, it took a lot of time to render them so I didn't have the time to do illustrations for every moment of the story.
Jedakk, I’ve always thought your "Sabina fainted in the rain" renders pretty close to what she’d look like dead, absent any postmortem lividity discoloration you might want to add.
 

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jedakk

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Jedakk, I’ve always thought your "Sabina fainted in the rain" renders pretty close to what she’d look like dead, absent any postmortem lividity discoloration you might want to add.
Yes, that does look a lot like she's done. Supposed to be fainted, but not much difference other than I would have had her hanging a little lower, not on the cornu like she is there.

wow nice work
Lai, these pictures are all in that Jedakk's Masterpiece thread, too.
 

jedakk

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hello again Sir

may i ask wht happened to lucilla?

is here story in another book or chapter?

Huge fan
lai

No. All there is about her is what is in the story, which I assume you already have. People keep wanting me to write a separate story about her, but I never have. I do have a lot of extra pictures of her but I think the best of those are already on that "Jedakk's Masterpiece" thread.
 

lai

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No. All there is about her is what is in the story, which I assume you already have. People keep wanting me to write a separate story about her, but I never have. I do have a lot of extra pictures of her but I think the best of those are already on that "Jedakk's Masterpiece" thread.
i understand

would you be open to displaying some of the sabina crux scenes here or in your masterpiece link Sir?

the scene numbers jump from like 18 to 26

just curious im sure everyone would be quite grateful

Huge fan
lai
 

jedakk

CARNIFEX MAXIMUS
i understand

would you be open to displaying some of the sabina crux scenes here or in your masterpiece link Sir?

the scene numbers jump from like 18 to 26

just curious im sure everyone would be quite grateful

Huge fan
lai
Ok, just to be clear, the scenes are numbered within each section, and the sections are as follows:

1: Salonina-Ajax
2: Prison
3: Lucilla
4: Whipping
5: Carrying
6: Nailing
7: Crucifixion
8: Finale

I think you must be looking at the Crucifixion scenes, Section 7. The scenes in that section are numbered 1 through 36 with one extra scene inserted between Scenes 2 and 3, Scene 2x5. Within each scene, there are a number of renders, no fixed number of them in any scene for various reasons. As I look at Scenes 19 through 25 of Section 7, there were not many renders done, 6 or 8 per scene. So maybe I never posted any beyond what were in the story. You've downloaded the story, right?

For some other scenes there were many renders done because I COULD, by that time. I had built a much more powerful computer and was able to render scenes in 20 minutes that used to take as much as eight hours each. But there are just too many to post when I'm limited to ten per message and it does take some time that I don't have to post 50 renders that way. Yes, there are as many as 50 renders of some scenes now - I picked the top ten and posted those. I don't have a website for downloads - this is not a business for me, just a hobby. So I really have no way to share more than what you see here.
 
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