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THE DEFILE

Unease grips me,
as we enter,
a narrow defile,
great rocks and trees,
steep stony slopes,
ominously close in,
to either side

Late afternoon,
on the third day,
of my journey north,
to join at last,
my betrothed,
serving with
Legio III Gallica

Reclining comfortably,
in the heat of the day,
in my lettica,
my Roman litter,
lined with pillows,
gently swaying,
borne by strong men,

My escort marches,
four abreast,
an entire centuria,
of eighty men
half leading, half following,
arms at the ready,
their duty to protect

Beside me,
young and beautiful,
fair-haired and blue-eyed,
my faithful maid servant,
of barbarian origins,
gently, sensitively combs,
my long dark hair

The defile deepens,
shadows cross,
something ill-defined,
anxiety giving,
crosses my mind,
an involuntary shiver,
danger threatens

The legionnaires,
feel it too,
it shows on their faces,
grim looks, grimaces,
glancing, watchful eyes,
instinctively closing ranks,
alert and muscles flexed

So suddenly it happens
breath taking in its violence,
the air is rent,
by hideous inhuman howls,
barbarians emerge,
from cover above us,
we are under attack

Closing ranks,
protective formation,
around my litter,
brave men all,
pummeled from all sides,
by missiles uncountable,
screams of anger, pain and death

I pull close the curtains,
we hug in desperation,
our litter shakes then falls,
with a lurch and a roll,
it tips on its edge,
we are thrown heavily
to the ground outside

Dazed and shaky,
I look around,
She is sprawled,
alongside me,
seems alright, unhurt
but the men, our protectors,
all slaughtered it seems

They lie in heaps,
barbarians astride them,
greedily stripping their bodies,
of armor and clothes,
cutting the throats of the surviving,
hideous, blood curdling,
screams fill the air

Pulled to my feet,
by iron-strong hands,
she beside me,
we both eye our captors
warily, proudly,
we must be strong,
help will surely come

Ripping of clothing,
they strip us bare,
to struggle is useless,
this fate we must share,
I close my legs vainly,
only to lose the last,
of my garments

Totally naked, exposed,
chest heaving, eyes wide,
the two of us stare,
into the lust-crazed eyes,
of the gathering horde
oh, what is to come!

Humiliation, pain,
violation, defilement
no quarter, no pity
our barbarian captors,
exhaust and satisfy
their hatred and hunger

It’s finally over,
we huddle together,
arm in arm, naked in shame,
their leader approaches,
eyeing us craftily,
no good, I am sure,
can come of this

He glares and grunts,
bellows orders,
men hasten to obey,
a tree is felled,
then another,
brought forward,
branches shorn

Both placed upright,
dug into the earth,
surrounded with,
heaps of naked,
legionnaires’ bodies,
a meaningful glance,
toward the two of us

Two stout poles,
tossed at our feet,
thrown bodily down,
flat on our backs,
arms outstretched,
ropes quickly bind,
wrists in place

Kicking and struggling,
more hands,
to hold us down,
pinned tightly we wait,
nails are produced,
points prick our flesh
hammers are raised

We scream in unison,
buck and twist,
pain so horrific,
then pulled up roughly,
to a sitting position,
pole across shoulders,
breasts hanging and swaying

Dragged backward,
crying and screaming
feet kicking and trashing,
over the bloody corpses,
of our fallen escort
slammed hard against,
the base of our posts

Raised up now,
to the upright posts,
the poles across,
our bare shoulders,
are secured tightly,
we hang stretched out,
helpless, side by side

Hands grab our feet
pushing them high
more nails are produced,
crushing blows delivered,
pinned to our crosses,
backs arched, we struggle
twisting and writhing

I look to her,
see her discomfort,
her gaze fixes on me,
those clear blue eyes,
captivating as always,
stirring my loins,
remembrances of love

Barbarians gathering,
soon to depart,
they know that relief,
will surely come,
Rome never forgets,
best to be gone

But they have left a parting gift,
a grim reminder to the relieving column,
a tableau of horror,
two naked, dying women,
hanging forlornly from crosses,
over a heap of legionary dead

Barbaria, 2014
 
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THE DEFILE

Unease grips me,
as we enter,
a narrow defile,
great rocks and trees,
steep stony slopes,
ominously close in,
to either side

Late afternoon,
on the third day,
of my journey north,
to join at last,
my betrothed,
serving with
Legio III Gallica

Reclining comfortably,
in the heat of the day,
in my lettica,
my Roman litter,
lined with pillows,
gently swaying,
borne by strong men,

My escort marches,
four abreast,
an entire centuria,
of eighty men
half leading, half following,
arms at the ready,
their duty to protect

Beside me,
young and beautiful,
fair-haired and blue-eyed,
my faithful maid servant,
of barbarian origins,
gently, sensitively combs,
my long dark hair

The defile deepens,
shadows cross,
something ill-defined,
anxiety giving,
crosses my mind,
an involuntary shiver,
danger threatens

The legionnaires,
feel it too,
it shows on their faces,
grim looks, grimaces,
glancing, watchful eyes,
instinctively closing ranks,
alert and muscles flexed

So suddenly it happens
breath taking in its violence,
the air is rent,
by hideous inhuman howls,
barbarians emerge,
from cover above us,
we are under attack

Closing ranks,
protective formation,
around my litter,
brave men all,
pummeled from all sides,
by missiles uncountable,
screams of anger, pain and death

I pull close the curtains,
we hug in desperation,
our litter shakes then falls,
with a lurch and a roll,
it tips on its edge,
we are thrown heavily
to the ground outside

Dazed and shaky,
I look around,
She is sprawled,
alongside me,
seems alright, unhurt
but the men, our protectors,
all slaughtered it seems

They lie in heaps,
barbarians astride them,
greedily stripping their bodies,
of armor and clothes,
cutting the throats of the surviving,
hideous, blood curdling,
screams fill the air

Pulled to my feet,
by iron-strong hands,
she beside me,
we both eye our captors
warily, proudly,
we must be strong,
help will surely come

Ripping of clothing,
they strip us bare,
to struggle is useless,
this fate we must share,
I close my legs vainly,
only to lose the last,
of my garments

Totally naked, exposed,
chest heaving, eyes wide,
the two of us stare,
into the lust-crazed eyes,
of the gathering horde
oh, what is to come!

Humiliation, pain,
violation, defilement
no quarter, no pity
our barbarian captors,
exhaust and satisfy
their hatred and hunger

It’s finally over,
we huddle together,
arm in arm, naked in shame,
their leader approaches,
eyeing us craftily,
no good, I am sure,
can come of this

He glares and grunts,
bellows orders,
men hasten to obey,
a tree is felled,
then another,
brought forward,
branches shorn

Both placed upright,
dug into the earth,
surrounded with,
heaps of naked,
legionnaires’ bodies,
a meaningful glance,
toward the two of us

Two stout poles,
tossed at our feet,
thrown bodily down,
flat on our backs,
arms outstretched,
ropes quickly bind,
wrists in place

Kicking and struggling,
more hands,
to hold us down,
pinned tightly we wait,
nails are produced,
points prick our flesh
hammers are raised

We scream in unison,
buck and twist,
pain so horrific,
then pulled up roughly,
to a sitting position,
pole across shoulders,
breasts hanging and swaying

Dragged backward,
crying and screaming
feet kicking and trashing,
over the bloody corpses,
of our fallen escort
slammed hard against,
the base of our posts

Raised up now,
to the upright posts,
the poles across,
our bare shoulders,
are secured tightly,
we hang stretched out,
helpless, side by side

Hands grab our feet
pushing them high
more nails are produced,
crushing blows delivered,
pinned to our crosses,
backs arched, we struggle
twisting and writhing

I look to her,
see her discomfort,
her gaze fixes on me,
those clear blue eyes,
captivating as always,
stirring my loins,
remembrances of love

Barbarians gathering,
soon to depart,
they know that relief,
will surely come,
Rome never forgets,
best to be gone

But they have left a parting gift,
a grim reminder to the relieving column,
a tableau of horror,
two naked, dying women,
hanging forlornly from crosses,
over a heap of legionary dead

Barbaria, 2014
fist reading this......................it is a long one:doh::devil:
 
From pampered maiden my clothes are torn. I try to run but to no avail. The rocks and mud betray my feet that has known only smooth marbled floors. They catch me with ease. I feel dirt on my skin that I had not felt since a child. I need to bathe yet they take me, they smelling as dirty I feel.

I claim ransom will be large I returned unharmed. One says 'I offered the same before they put my woman on a cross'. My hair is grabbed at my neck's nape. 'My revenge with you is Rome's loss' and then I suffer rape.
gn6 new chain gang.jpg

I know it is the cross that I await...

tree

...channeling Barbaria...
 
WOW....that should have been part of the poem....well, can't think of everything, but thanks Tree! Next time.

What does channeling mean, by the way....?????? Should I be proud or frightened?
 
From pampered maiden my clothes are torn. I try to run but to no avail. The rocks and mud betray my feet that has known only smooth marbled floors. They catch me with ease. I feel dirt on my skin that I had not felt since a child. I need to bathe yet they take me, they smelling as dirty I feel.

I claim ransom will be large I returned unharmed. One says 'I offered the same before they put my woman on a cross'. My hair is grabbed at my neck's nape. 'My revenge with you is Rome's loss' and then I suffer rape.
View attachment 119114

I know it is the cross that I await...

tree

...channeling Barbaria...
where have i seen that girl earlier
WOW....that should have been part of the poem....well, can't think of everything, but thanks Tree! Next time.

What does channeling mean, by the way....?????? Should I be proud or frightened?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_modern_channelled_texts
 
THE DEFILE
what a story!!!! loved it.
Unease grips me,
as we enter,
a narrow defile,
great rocks and trees,
steep stony slopes,
ominously close in,
to either side

Late afternoon,
on the third day,
of my journey north,
to join at last,
my betrothed,
serving with
Legio III Gallica

Reclining comfortably,
in the heat of the day,
in my lettica,
my Roman litter,
lined with pillows,
gently swaying,
borne by strong men,

My escort marches,
four abreast,
an entire centuria,
of eighty men
half leading, half following,
arms at the ready,
their duty to protect

Beside me,
young and beautiful,
fair-haired and blue-eyed,
my faithful maid servant,
of barbarian origins,
gently, sensitively combs,
my long dark hair

The defile deepens,
shadows cross,
something ill-defined,
anxiety giving,
crosses my mind,
an involuntary shiver,
danger threatens

The legionnaires,
feel it too,
it shows on their faces,
grim looks, grimaces,
glancing, watchful eyes,
instinctively closing ranks,
alert and muscles flexed

So suddenly it happens
breath taking in its violence,
the air is rent,
by hideous inhuman howls,
barbarians emerge,
from cover above us,
we are under attack

Closing ranks,
protective formation,
around my litter,
brave men all,
pummeled from all sides,
by missiles uncountable,
screams of anger, pain and death

I pull close the curtains,
we hug in desperation,
our litter shakes then falls,
with a lurch and a roll,
it tips on its edge,
we are thrown heavily
to the ground outside

Dazed and shaky,
I look around,
She is sprawled,
alongside me,
seems alright, unhurt
but the men, our protectors,
all slaughtered it seems

They lie in heaps,
barbarians astride them,
greedily stripping their bodies,
of armor and clothes,
cutting the throats of the surviving,
hideous, blood curdling,
screams fill the air

Pulled to my feet,
by iron-strong hands,
she beside me,
we both eye our captors
warily, proudly,
we must be strong,
help will surely come

Ripping of clothing,
they strip us bare,
to struggle is useless,
this fate we must share,
I close my legs vainly,
only to lose the last,
of my garments

Totally naked, exposed,
chest heaving, eyes wide,
the two of us stare,
into the lust-crazed eyes,
of the gathering horde
oh, what is to come!

Humiliation, pain,
violation, defilement
no quarter, no pity
our barbarian captors,
exhaust and satisfy
their hatred and hunger

It’s finally over,
we huddle together,
arm in arm, naked in shame,
their leader approaches,
eyeing us craftily,
no good, I am sure,
can come of this

He glares and grunts,
bellows orders,
men hasten to obey,
a tree is felled,
then another,
brought forward,
branches shorn

Both placed upright,
dug into the earth,
surrounded with,
heaps of naked,
legionnaires’ bodies,
a meaningful glance,
toward the two of us

Two stout poles,
tossed at our feet,
thrown bodily down,
flat on our backs,
arms outstretched,
ropes quickly bind,
wrists in place

Kicking and struggling,
more hands,
to hold us down,
pinned tightly we wait,
nails are produced,
points prick our flesh
hammers are raised

We scream in unison,
buck and twist,
pain so horrific,
then pulled up roughly,
to a sitting position,
pole across shoulders,
breasts hanging and swaying

Dragged backward,
crying and screaming
feet kicking and trashing,
over the bloody corpses,
of our fallen escort
slammed hard against,
the base of our posts

Raised up now,
to the upright posts,
the poles across,
our bare shoulders,
are secured tightly,
we hang stretched out,
helpless, side by side

Hands grab our feet
pushing them high
more nails are produced,
crushing blows delivered,
pinned to our crosses,
backs arched, we struggle
twisting and writhing

I look to her,
see her discomfort,
her gaze fixes on me,
those clear blue eyes,
captivating as always,
stirring my loins,
remembrances of love

Barbarians gathering,
soon to depart,
they know that relief,
will surely come,
Rome never forgets,
best to be gone

But they have left a parting gift,
a grim reminder to the relieving column,
a tableau of horror,
two naked, dying women,
hanging forlornly from crosses,
over a heap of legionary dead

Barbaria, 2014
From pampered maiden my clothes are torn. I try to run but to no avail. The rocks and mud betray my feet that has known only smooth marbled floors. They catch me with ease. I feel dirt on my skin that I had not felt since a child. I need to bathe yet they take me, they smelling as dirty I feel.

I claim ransom will be large I returned unharmed. One says 'I offered the same before they put my woman on a cross'. My hair is grabbed at my neck's nape. 'My revenge with you is Rome's loss' and then I suffer rape.
View attachment 119114

I know it is the cross that I await...

tree

...channeling Barbaria...
very nice!!!! i see their are others who have great stories to tell like me.
 
What does channeling mean, by the way....?????? -barb

Sort of 'reading your mind'... I just don't know if you merely await the cross or want it...

t
 
THE DEFILE

Unease grips me,
as we enter,
a narrow defile,
great rocks and trees,
steep stony slopes,
ominously close in,
to either side

Late afternoon,
on the third day,
of my journey north,
to join at last,
my betrothed,
serving with
Legio III Gallica

Reclining comfortably,
in the heat of the day,
in my lettica,
my Roman litter,
lined with pillows,
gently swaying,
borne by strong men,

My escort marches,
four abreast,
an entire centuria,
of eighty men
half leading, half following,
arms at the ready,
their duty to protect

Beside me,
young and beautiful,
fair-haired and blue-eyed,
my faithful maid servant,
of barbarian origins,
gently, sensitively combs,
my long dark hair

The defile deepens,
shadows cross,
something ill-defined,
anxiety giving,
crosses my mind,
an involuntary shiver,
danger threatens

The legionnaires,
feel it too,
it shows on their faces,
grim looks, grimaces,
glancing, watchful eyes,
instinctively closing ranks,
alert and muscles flexed

So suddenly it happens
breath taking in its violence,
the air is rent,
by hideous inhuman howls,
barbarians emerge,
from cover above us,
we are under attack

Closing ranks,
protective formation,
around my litter,
brave men all,
pummeled from all sides,
by missiles uncountable,
screams of anger, pain and death

I pull close the curtains,
we hug in desperation,
our litter shakes then falls,
with a lurch and a roll,
it tips on its edge,
we are thrown heavily
to the ground outside

Dazed and shaky,
I look around,
She is sprawled,
alongside me,
seems alright, unhurt
but the men, our protectors,
all slaughtered it seems

They lie in heaps,
barbarians astride them,
greedily stripping their bodies,
of armor and clothes,
cutting the throats of the surviving,
hideous, blood curdling,
screams fill the air

Pulled to my feet,
by iron-strong hands,
she beside me,
we both eye our captors
warily, proudly,
we must be strong,
help will surely come

Ripping of clothing,
they strip us bare,
to struggle is useless,
this fate we must share,
I close my legs vainly,
only to lose the last,
of my garments

Totally naked, exposed,
chest heaving, eyes wide,
the two of us stare,
into the lust-crazed eyes,
of the gathering horde
oh, what is to come!

Humiliation, pain,
violation, defilement
no quarter, no pity
our barbarian captors,
exhaust and satisfy
their hatred and hunger

It’s finally over,
we huddle together,
arm in arm, naked in shame,
their leader approaches,
eyeing us craftily,
no good, I am sure,
can come of this

He glares and grunts,
bellows orders,
men hasten to obey,
a tree is felled,
then another,
brought forward,
branches shorn

Both placed upright,
dug into the earth,
surrounded with,
heaps of naked,
legionnaires’ bodies,
a meaningful glance,
toward the two of us

Two stout poles,
tossed at our feet,
thrown bodily down,
flat on our backs,
arms outstretched,
ropes quickly bind,
wrists in place

Kicking and struggling,
more hands,
to hold us down,
pinned tightly we wait,
nails are produced,
points prick our flesh
hammers are raised

We scream in unison,
buck and twist,
pain so horrific,
then pulled up roughly,
to a sitting position,
pole across shoulders,
breasts hanging and swaying

Dragged backward,
crying and screaming
feet kicking and trashing,
over the bloody corpses,
of our fallen escort
slammed hard against,
the base of our posts

Raised up now,
to the upright posts,
the poles across,
our bare shoulders,
are secured tightly,
we hang stretched out,
helpless, side by side

Hands grab our feet
pushing them high
more nails are produced,
crushing blows delivered,
pinned to our crosses,
backs arched, we struggle
twisting and writhing

I look to her,
see her discomfort,
her gaze fixes on me,
those clear blue eyes,
captivating as always,
stirring my loins,
remembrances of love

Barbarians gathering,
soon to depart,
they know that relief,
will surely come,
Rome never forgets,
best to be gone

But they have left a parting gift,
a grim reminder to the relieving column,
a tableau of horror,
two naked, dying women,
hanging forlornly from crosses,
over a heap of legionary dead

Barbaria, 2014
flower3
THE DEFILE

Unease grips me,
as we enter,
a narrow defile,
great rocks and trees,
steep stony slopes,
ominously close in,
to either side

Late afternoon,
on the third day,
of my journey north,
to join at last,
my betrothed,
serving with
Legio III Gallica

Reclining comfortably,
in the heat of the day,
in my lettica,
my Roman litter,
lined with pillows,
gently swaying,
borne by strong men,

My escort marches,
four abreast,
an entire centuria,
of eighty men
half leading, half following,
arms at the ready,
their duty to protect

Beside me,
young and beautiful,
fair-haired and blue-eyed,
my faithful maid servant,
of barbarian origins,
gently, sensitively combs,
my long dark hair

The defile deepens,
shadows cross,
something ill-defined,
anxiety giving,
crosses my mind,
an involuntary shiver,
danger threatens

The legionnaires,
feel it too,
it shows on their faces,
grim looks, grimaces,
glancing, watchful eyes,
instinctively closing ranks,
alert and muscles flexed

So suddenly it happens
breath taking in its violence,
the air is rent,
by hideous inhuman howls,
barbarians emerge,
from cover above us,
we are under attack

Closing ranks,
protective formation,
around my litter,
brave men all,
pummeled from all sides,
by missiles uncountable,
screams of anger, pain and death

I pull close the curtains,
we hug in desperation,
our litter shakes then falls,
with a lurch and a roll,
it tips on its edge,
we are thrown heavily
to the ground outside

Dazed and shaky,
I look around,
She is sprawled,
alongside me,
seems alright, unhurt
but the men, our protectors,
all slaughtered it seems

They lie in heaps,
barbarians astride them,
greedily stripping their bodies,
of armor and clothes,
cutting the throats of the surviving,
hideous, blood curdling,
screams fill the air

Pulled to my feet,
by iron-strong hands,
she beside me,
we both eye our captors
warily, proudly,
we must be strong,
help will surely come

Ripping of clothing,
they strip us bare,
to struggle is useless,
this fate we must share,
I close my legs vainly,
only to lose the last,
of my garments

Totally naked, exposed,
chest heaving, eyes wide,
the two of us stare,
into the lust-crazed eyes,
of the gathering horde
oh, what is to come!

Humiliation, pain,
violation, defilement
no quarter, no pity
our barbarian captors,
exhaust and satisfy
their hatred and hunger

It’s finally over,
we huddle together,
arm in arm, naked in shame,
their leader approaches,
eyeing us craftily,
no good, I am sure,
can come of this

He glares and grunts,
bellows orders,
men hasten to obey,
a tree is felled,
then another,
brought forward,
branches shorn

Both placed upright,
dug into the earth,
surrounded with,
heaps of naked,
legionnaires’ bodies,
a meaningful glance,
toward the two of us

Two stout poles,
tossed at our feet,
thrown bodily down,
flat on our backs,
arms outstretched,
ropes quickly bind,
wrists in place

Kicking and struggling,
more hands,
to hold us down,
pinned tightly we wait,
nails are produced,
points prick our flesh
hammers are raised

We scream in unison,
buck and twist,
pain so horrific,
then pulled up roughly,
to a sitting position,
pole across shoulders,
breasts hanging and swaying

Dragged backward,
crying and screaming
feet kicking and trashing,
over the bloody corpses,
of our fallen escort
slammed hard against,
the base of our posts

Raised up now,
to the upright posts,
the poles across,
our bare shoulders,
are secured tightly,
we hang stretched out,
helpless, side by side

Hands grab our feet
pushing them high
more nails are produced,
crushing blows delivered,
pinned to our crosses,
backs arched, we struggle
twisting and writhing

I look to her,
see her discomfort,
her gaze fixes on me,
those clear blue eyes,
captivating as always,
stirring my loins,
remembrances of love

Barbarians gathering,
soon to depart,
they know that relief,
will surely come,
Rome never forgets,
best to be gone

But they have left a parting gift,
a grim reminder to the relieving column,
a tableau of horror,
two naked, dying women,
hanging forlornly from crosses,
over a heap of legionary dead

Barbaria, 2014
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