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Plantation Plight By Barbaria And Windar

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old slave said:
Poor Barb and Pat.

A mine sounds awful.

They might get jobs doing the cooking or paperwork if Barb can behave herself. Can you do that Barb? For the sake of Pat?

Very good story, had us guessing to the end, not the ending I wanted, but so what, they were slaves, they had no choice.
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windar said:
May I ask what ending you wanted?
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Well, I'm a big softie. I prefer to think that the Sheriff's discussion with Charles is all a ruse. His "friend" shows up and buys Pat and Barb, and later that evening he turns them over to Sheriff John. John, tired of enforcing slavery takes them deep into the forested wilderness to join the army of escaped rebel slaves.

It takes some time, but he finally wins over Pat. The two of them decide to move on and find a place where they can start over.

Barb recovers from her ordeal and becomes a favourite of the boys and girls among the escaped slaves:rolleyes::p, but she never gets over her resentment of Charles and Sarah and the society that broke up her family and made her a slave.:mad: She becomes the rebel leader (as we all know) and begins a campaign of raids, vowing never to give slave-owners a moment's peace.

Hey. It could happen.;):cool:

Great story, Windar and Barb!! :clapping::clapping:
 
thehangingtree said:
This is why Nailus Martyrs sales are 'out-stripping' Victoria's Secret's sales...
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Maybe it's that the NM catalogue models are naked? :rolleyes:

Jollyrei said:
Well, I'm a big softie. I prefer to think that the Sheriff's discussion with Charles is all a ruse. His "friend" shows up and buys Pat and Barb, and later that evening he turns them over to Sheriff John. John, tired of enforcing slavery takes them deep into the forested wilderness to join the army of escaped rebel slaves.

It takes some time, but he finally wins over Pat. The two of them decide to move on and find a place where they can start over.

Barb recovers from her ordeal and becomes a favourite of the boys and girls among the escaped slaves:rolleyes::p, but she never gets over her resentment of Charles and Sarah and the society that broke up her family and made her a slave.:mad: She becomes the rebel leader (as we all know) and begins a campaign of raids, vowing never to give slave-owners a moment's peace.

Hey. It could happen.;):cool:

Great story, Windar and Barb!! :clapping::clapping:
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Hondoboot2 said:
Great story Barb and Windar!
Very surprising ending, I never would have guessed Barb and Pat would end up working in a mine.
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Thanks guys! :)
 
Jollyrei said:
Well, I'm a big softie. I prefer to think that the Sheriff's discussion with Charles is all a ruse. His "friend" shows up and buys Pat and Barb, and later that evening he turns them over to Sheriff John. John, tired of enforcing slavery takes them deep into the forested wilderness to join the army of escaped rebel slaves.

It takes some time, but he finally wins over Pat. The two of them decide to move on and find a place where they can start over.

Barb recovers from her ordeal and becomes a favourite of the boys and girls among the escaped slaves:rolleyes::p, but she never gets over her resentment of Charles and Sarah and the society that broke up her family and made her a slave.:mad: She becomes the rebel leader (as we all know) and begins a campaign of raids, vowing never to give slave-owners a moment's peace.

Hey. It could happen.;):cool:

Great story, Windar and Barb!! :clapping::clapping:
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Well, Jolly, I'm a big softie too. Barb and I discussed many possible endings. What we came up with is an ending of this story, but not of the saga of Barb and Pat and the society they are unfortunate enough to be a part of.

When we come back to them, as we plan to, many things are possible, including some of the ideas you have mentioned. The Sheriff's eyes have been opened by his realization, that is for sure. Charles and Sarah may have their eyes opened by events. And we should think a bit about George-we already know he has mixed feelings about Barb and Pat.

In the meantime, I sincerely thank all of you for sticking with this story and its many twists and turns.

If I can allow myself a small plug, the story of "The Pirettes of Ocracoke" is finally ready to get going. I hope you guys will check it out. Some of you may be in it.
 
You know we always have the book covers but never the movie... I'm reworking a John Lennon song for the theme changing it from "Mind Games" to 'Mine Games'- 'Playing those mine games forever...' It's sort of catchy, no?
Or do you prefer 'Working in a Coal Mine'???
 
Barbaria1 said:
22. EPILOGUE



"The best thing you can do, son, is to send them away. It's the only way to save your marriage and get some of what you paid for them back. I have a good friend who owns a mine and he needs workers very badly. He'll give you a good price for them. The best thing you can do for yourself, Sarah and for me is to sell them to him. Will you do that?"

The last thing I remember before slipping into unconsciousness again was that Charles had agreed, declaring that the money sounded good and that the departure of Pat and me from the Plantation would certainly lessen the strain for him of having to live with Sarah's jealousies.

The two men shook hands and walked away.
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hmmmm. seems pat and barb will be sold again. perhaps to that cruel woman owning another farm? where charles and srah will end as slaves themselves when their credits are running out?
 
geolier said:
yep. insecurity is a fact in this society. I noticed Charles prolongation of his loan and I had a faint sensation that one day barb and pat are slaves at another farm, and sarah and charles too. and the cruel (female) owner of that farm orders barb to cut off charles testicles (there are intriguing pics of a scene like this somewhere in this site), and torture sarah, perhaps by flaying her?
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grrrr. I had the idea that the aforementioned picture (a beautiful (dressed) woman who cuts off the testicles of a (naked) prisoner { or even several prisoners } ) could be found somewhere in "other forms of executions". so I looked at each of the 181 pages (which is indeed a thing worth doing everynow and then, because there are interesting things/themes on display) - but alas, nothing. the pics I have in mind are for sure here in CF, but now I have no idea where to look.
 
Good day all.

When last we left this thread, there was talk of a possible sequel and the various things that could happen. This is just to let everyone know that Barb and I have indeed been hard at work on just such a project and that it has now advanced far enough that we feel comfortable to begin posting it in the next few days. We can't promise that every one of the great ideas you guys proposed will be in the story, but certainly many will.

The title will be "Mine Misery" and I believe old slave wins the prize for guessing that. I hereby award him 3 trophy points and he can have 3 more if he can figure out what one does with trophy points.

Until the story begins, be well...
 
"Ladies and Gentlemen

It’s a great honour to receive three trophy points from someone as respected and revered as windar.

I accept these points, not just for myself, but the team behind me: my mistress, who knows just where to aim the whip to inspire me; my cat, who knows just where to aim his claws to inspire me; and the ever present threat I might meet Dorothy on Dewsbury Road.

I intend to use these points to do good in the world: to spread the Good Word of crux to all the folk yet to experience it’s magic; to take the whip to those ignorant of it’s potent power; to use bondage and humiliation on those misguided enough not to believe.

I truly believe, that from these humble beginnings, these three points will multiply through the universe to bring joy and contentment to all receptive to their message."
 
old slave said:
"Ladies and Gentlemen

It’s a great honour to receive three trophy points from someone as respected and revered as windar.

I accept these points, not just for myself, but the team behind me: my mistress, who knows just where to aim the whip to inspire me; my cat, who knows just where to aim his claws to inspire me; and the ever present threat I might meet Dorothy on Dewsbury Road.

I intend to use these points to do good in the world: to spread the Good Word of crux to all the folk yet to experience it’s magic; to take the whip to those ignorant of it’s potent power; to use bondage and humiliation on those misguided enough not to believe.

I truly believe, that from these humble beginnings, these three points will multiply through the universe to bring joy and contentment to all receptive to their message."
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I feel the early tremors of a movement here .. an awakening ... a populist tidal wave ... the irresistible power of the Good Word according to Old Slave ... the crumbling of resistance ...

The triumph of crux is at hand ... rejoice all you whipsters, master cruxers and writhing naked women helplessly nailed to the wood ... rise up and be counted! :p:D:rolleyes:
 
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old slave said:
"Ladies and Gentlemen

It’s a great honour to receive three trophy points from someone as respected and revered as windar.

I accept these points, not just for myself, but the team behind me: my mistress, who knows just where to aim the whip to inspire me; my cat, who knows just where to aim his claws to inspire me; and the ever present threat I might meet Dorothy on Dewsbury Road.

I intend to use these points to do good in the world: to spread the Good Word of crux to all the folk yet to experience it’s magic; to take the whip to those ignorant of it’s potent power; to use bondage and humiliation on those misguided enough not to believe.

I truly believe, that from these humble beginnings, these three points will multiply through the universe to bring joy and contentment to all receptive to their message."
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If i meet you on Dewsbury Road i will set the dog on you
 
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