Hondoboot2
QUAESTOR PULCHRITUDINIS
Thank you Barbaria for the kind words! I will try to come up with more poems or stories.Great beginning....keep going please!
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Thank you Barbaria for the kind words! I will try to come up with more poems or stories.Great beginning....keep going please!
Thank you Top-Cat!Go Ahead, My Friend!
Top-Cat
Thank you Sir Wragg!Don't do yourself down, Hondoboot! That is excellent, and I for one enjoyed it greatly!
Thank you LittleSiss! I will post more poems or stories as they come to meWhen you see and hear the words and they can't be denied ... no matter what they are ... write them down.
Yes! Keep going!
Thank you LittleSiss! I will post more poems or stories as they come to me
Great to see this Hondo and such an interesting analogy.I hate starting new Threads, I don't like creating unnecessary wasted space. I just did not know where to place this little poem I just wrote (please cut me some slack, it just popped into my head, and I wrote it in about 5 min. It is close to bedtime). I am nowhere near the many great writers on this forum (Tree, Eulalia, LittleSiss,Barbaria,Pkindenhaag...etc). You guys and gals inspire me to try a poem myself . Depending on the response, I may add more on this same Thread, therefore I won't have to start another thread. Ok....here goes...........
My lover, meet me at lands end at twilight time
At the cliff where the rocks meet the crashing sea
We'll make love under a starless sky
Take my hand
Don't be afraid
Tonight will last forever
Meet me at lands end where the rocks and sea lie below
Let's make love like never before
Afterwards we'll take a journey into the place
Where the living meet the dead
Thank you Pp!Great to see this Hondo and such an interesting analogy.
Thank you Eulalia!Yes, it conjures up a vivid picture, nice use of simple words that match the wild, elemental setting -
keep it up hondo!
Came blowin' in .....The summer wind ...
To raise my kite to the sky.......Came blowin' in .....
I hate starting new Threads, I don't like creating unnecessary wasted space. I just did not know where to place this little poem I just wrote (please cut me some slack, it just popped into my head, and I wrote it in about 5 min. It is close to bedtime). I am nowhere near the many great writers on this forum (Tree, Eulalia, LittleSiss,Barbaria,Pkindenhaag...etc). You guys and gals inspire me to try a poem myself . Depending on the response, I may add more on this same Thread, therefore I won't have to start another thread. Ok....here goes...........
My lover, meet me at lands end at twilight time
At the cliff where the rocks meet the crashing sea
We'll make love under a starless sky
Take my hand
Don't be afraid
Tonight will last forever
Meet me at lands end where the rocks and sea lie below
Let's make love like never before
Afterwards we'll take a journey into the place
Where the living meet the dead
Now for the conclusion:
Now, after this orgasmic ecstasy
Comes the realization that this fantasy
Must come to a conclusion we both wish
Come my love, let's embrace as we
begin the final journey
The journey into the darkness to meet the dead
The rocks and sea await us below.
Come, let's leave this life, and enter a new world
The world of the dead
Dark, gloomy...atmospheric...seductive
A contemporary E. A. Poe...
Spoons.I love it - let's have more poetic chaos Jacks -
what do you call your nails?