Crowdsourcing stories: "Heroine Torture Chamber”

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7.Shinchow geographical features
We need help with this one.
As a port city,Shinchow City has excellent natural deep water port and shipbuilding industry; It can berth more than 400 ships of different sizes at the same time.
We know The city is built on a vast plain, with the sea and dense forests nearby.
That the city is near Booty Bay, and there is a small hill called Mount Dharma.
It has four distinct seasons, and the climate is suitable for human survival.
It is neither hot in summer nor cold in winter, and the commercial prosperity attracts a large number of immigrants from the vast areas of Russia to come here.
Like the author of the city can expand his geography and buildings, it has no strict building aesthetic or great engineers, immigrants with arbitrary construction of their residential areas, almost no one can speak so many temporary buildings, but the city is optional construction type, the tyrant even his palace style drawing without any idea, It is a city of haphazard construction and brutal construction that has never been seen before.
The sea is calm, the city has a barrier island, the island construction has a random post, it is more often only a few soldiers stationed, beacon tower of the early warning effect, on the beach, or 3.2 km of rotten mud, increased the ability of the city against external threats, Japan over the next 10 years began to invade the northeast Asia on the Korean peninsula, But no matter how much Japan expands, it can fend off threats from the sea.

 

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This is a cold winter in the year 1580, Captain Velazo rushing to the throne room in the grand palace of the capital
"I must see the king. Open the door！"

The king was sitting on his throne waiting for the captain. "I know that already, captain. Rumours are always running faster than my soldiers. How much damage?"

"The rebellion triggered the ignorant rioter, they looted a warship and killed all the sailors on board. We estimate a few cannons and around 850 kilos of gold has been looted."

The King's face turns red with anger, and he shouted: "Today, you led 700 archers, prepared weapons and food, kill or arrest those rebels! I want them to pay the price of blood for such a terrible crime!"

The rebellion has been pacified by the end of spring in next year, a dozen of rebels have been captured...

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Here is the basic scenario of our story, We are planning to write a novel about the ancient heroine and tyrant's terror-torture room. However, We were very distressed because we didn't know what to do with many things, so we wrote this questionnaire, by collecting people imagination of being caught, we may be able to create not a single story, but a series of stories regarding defeated heroines. If you are interested, you can substitute the heroine as yourself in the following Questionnaire and imagine you are the one being caught when the rebellion is concluded :

1. In the story, if you are captured by the enemy, what your age is? What was your role in the rebellion? (The Queen? A Chiefess? A General? A Captain? )

2. Reasons for being captured by the enemy?

3. Mode of escort: (for example, naked walking, prison car transportation, etc.)?

4. As a heroine who realizes her tragic ending is upon her, what gesture (verbal or otherwise) do you think is the most appropriate?

5. What kind of torture do you fear most?

6. When you find that an interrogator threatens you with bestiality and demand that you reveal all that you know, what will you do?

7. You were imprisoned and bound in the town square. Your anus and genitals are heavily tortured by vicious ‘Pears’, and you see the traitor you hated most. What would you do?

8. In the dark torture room, you sit on the triangular "Spanish donkey". Your whole body weight falls on the crotch at the top of the sharp corner. Both feet and ankles are also tied with a 50-pound bucket of water hanging from each. You haven't slept for three days. The enemy forces you to admit that you are a "stupid mother” who betrayed your king for a few copper coins". But you know that the so-called "King" has indiscriminately murdered people in your village. You joined the rebel army for justice. How would you respond?

9. You are sitting on an iron chair with a burning brazier under it. You are thirsty and sweating all over. You feel like you are about to collapse. The enemy says that as long as you sign the confession, they will stop the torture and claim that you are a "Stupid female” monkey and that you don't know what you're doing. You will kneel down and salute the king under the gaze of the dead rebel's head hanging from a spike, and beg your interrogator for a quick death. Those dead rebel comrades are your family. They died to protect you. What kind of response will you make?

10. You are hung upside down, spread-eagled on the rack. Two thick wooden phalluses are stuffed in your vagina and anus. Two executioners begin saw the two wooden rods with blunt saws. The violent vibration in your body is unbearable. At this time, the traitor you hate most loudly slanders your behaviour and claims: "This is a little bitch who acts like a slut in the rebels den. She is worthless.” You used to have feelings for this traitor, before his defection. Does this man want to somehow protect you from death and redeem his guilty conscience, or keep you as his slave? How will you respond/react?

We are very grateful for your help!

1. An Assassin for my people a blade in the dark.
2. I was captured deep behind enemy lies just as i was about to strike.
3. Striped naked and bound in cuffs and chains.
4. I will fight every step of the way.
5. Sawn in half/dismembermant.
6. I will reveal nothing and fuck and be fucked by whatever they put in front of me, man or bull.
7. Look at him with fury.
8. Fuck your "King"
9. No i will sign nothing
10. I grow wet when i see him, but he will not save me he wants me punished.

 

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8.Shinchow Society
Shinchow society is very similar to chess.
King belongs to the apex of the urban ruling class.
Queen is a tribal chieftain who canonizes the matriarchal clan in the surrounding mountains and forests.
Some tribes are very powerful.
In order to win them over, good citizens of the city give their chieftain the title of Queen.
The queen is only an honorary title.
The queen has no status in the city.
This honorary title is only effective in the tribe, which means that the king recognizes the strength of the chieftain tribe.
Rook is a good citizen with a title among the nobles.
They are usually the servants of the king.
Everyone is a servant of the king and is loyal to the king
They are also Marshals in the army.
They are senior officers and usually reliable figures appointed by the king.
These people adhere to the glory of loyalty and continue to fight for the king.
They are powerful protectors of the king.
Bishop is the clergy of the church on the mountain and the monks in the temple at the foot of the mountain.
They appear in the coronation ceremony of the king and the confession ceremony of sinners.
Most bishop are diplomats.
They appear in the diplomatic occasions of the city.
Everyone is erudite, but they have no enthusiasm for religion.
They do not preach or share knowledge.
They are just a group of social parasites.
Their duty is to record the history of the city, but no one does so, so no one knows about the history of shinchow.
Knight is the patriarch of a large family living in the city.
They have a large number. Everyone is related.
The king and rook come from them.
They can recommend wise people among the patriarchs, that is, the people who get along with them best.
These people run the smallest unit family in society and firmly grasp the pawn of the peasant class.
This city can be regarded as a big family, and each knight is responsible for the division of social functions.
In midsummer, the humble peasants would gather in their master's house and offer all the boys in the house, hoping that the boy would be selected by the squire as a member of the security team.
To become a home for the security forces to enter the city as Knights' guards, representing an extremely glorious position, and a well paid position (from the point of view of urban civilians).
After a whole day's call, the strongest children will get the first reward in their life.
For farmers living in the countryside, this may be an asset that ordinary people can't save for a lifetime.
However, the bounty comes and goes faster.
The owner of the guard does not provide the armor and weapons to wear.
The security personnel must buy the necessary equipment out of their own pocket.
The money quickly disappears when purchasing equipment.
In addition, the Knights will also ask the security personnel to contribute part of the bounty to the priests or monks of the church or temple.
Farmers who become guards have two benefits, shelter from the wind and rain and stable food distribution.
Although they can not be compared with the mountain castle and delicacies where the knight lives, they are at least one of the best enjoyment among the peasant class. In theory, the salary of guards should be higher than that of farmers, but in the hands of these greedy owners, welfare often becomes an excuse for exploitation.
They deduct the salary of guards on this reason, making guards still poor.
Although the guards should be similar to the police in modern society, they actually serve as the patrol task of the urban defense army.
They are also the king's private army and the best human shield on the battlefield.
When the Knights are called up to join the war, he will take a large number of taxis to the battlefield and leave enough troops to defend his territory.

 

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9.Life in Shinchow
Brilliant city will inevitably become an eventful place and Trade Center.
Shinchow people are reluctant to accept this fact, so no one wants to think about why and how all this happened.
Smart people know that shinchow city is a rich place where rich people gather to trade, In a wide range of transactions, they created great wealth at a speed that could not be known by the people in the remote areas of Mongolia and the ancient traditional agricultural society in East Asia.
Money is the firewood under the big boiler.
The big boiler itself and the spoon stirring it are various forces trapped in endless struggle.
They fight for power, They are guilds, nobles, vendors, mercenaries, city law enforcers, criminal gangs, independent citizens who make a living and pirates who rob everywhere.
Some nations find life in Shinchow city an addiction they can't kick.
Various forces, from the chamber of commerce and feudal powers to women rebels who wanted change, found espionage, and even assassination, an effective means of doing business in the city.
While there's no shortage of cash to be had in the city of Glory, it also means you probably have a pair of eyes or ears behind you every private moment.
Many people in Shinchow use secret rooms or forged documents to prevent ear from the wall. No one is safe from the tyrant's henchmen and spies.

 

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10.The story style
Shinchow City has a very unique culture and a particularly casual law.
The perspective of describing it can be described from the perspective of foreign tourists.
Just like Marco Polo came to China, a tourist named Tang Ao in Chinese traditional novels traveled overseas.
Tourists of different cultures have a thousand Shinchow cities in their eyes.
We don't deliberately regulate who is the real Shinchow people, We just pass by Shinchow for various reasons.
The best identity is businessmen.
Their hierarchical status is relatively second only to the nobility in Shinchow City.
The best identity you choose is an external businessman.
You can see a lot of things. Moreover, Shinchow City is one of the places in the East that are very friendly to businessmen.
It welcomes businessmen to trade, which promotes its prosperity. Anyway, Since you come to Shinchow City, you are friends. Here ends the story.
Welcome to visit here.
I hope you like this city.

 

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I really want to thank the people who helped us improve the story. Thank you！

 

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Prologue​

This is a cold winter in the year 1580, Captain Velazo rushing to the throne room in the grand palace of the capital.

"I must see the king. Open the door！"

The king was sitting on his throne waiting for the captain. "I know that already, captain. Rumours are always running faster than my soldiers. How much damage?"

"The rebellion triggered the ignorant rioter, they looted a warship and killed all the sailors on board. We estimate a few cannons and around 850 kilos of gold has been looted."

The King's face turns red with anger, and he shouted: "Today, you led 700 archers, prepared weapons and food, kill or arrest those rebels! I want them to pay the price of blood for such a terrible crime!"

The rebellion has been pacified by the end of spring in next year, a dozen of rebels have been captured...

 

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Act 1

Scene I Soliloquy by a Japanese businessman​

Spring in 1581 disappeared in a hurry, and summer came quickly.

I am a Japanese businessman who has not left a name in history.

Just like this once prosperous city, I came to this city in the summer.

I have a mission to contact the resistance forces in this city.

This year, Japan sent many envoys to Korea.

We are responsible for helping Japan find suitable fiefs for those meritorious generals who quell the war.

Japan is really too small.

I could never have imagined that my mission would be a complete failure as soon as I arrived in the city.

 

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Act 1

Scene 2 Summer is annoying and irritable
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"Master！Master！We lose contact with Akiha(秋叶)！She was nowhere to be found! I'm afraid……She's already in enemy hands!"

When I arrived in the city to hear the bad news, I had a sense of foreboding, because the female ninja Akiha(秋叶) did not meet me at the dock as promised.

I know，She was a princess of a tribe.

The tribe was the first to rebel against the tyrant,

She was the only member of the tribe who remained free after the tyrant's manhunt.

That year she was only 5 years old, was being pursued by the enemy,

A Japanese merchant ship had just arrived to escape the gale,They saved her，gave her a Japanese name-Akiha(秋叶).

The name came from the fact that when they rescued her, the leaves had turned yellow in the wind, and they named her after seeing the dead leaves.

It means rebirth in Japanese culture.

and according to her will, she trained to become an excellent female ninja.

After her serve with distinction in the war for the general.，she was allowed to leave Japan and was set free.

It is our general asked what she wanted to reward, she asked to arrange a boat, go back to the city,for her people revenge on the king.

Her lurks in the city,Assassinate the king's minions and contact other forces against the tyrant.

My general gave her the greatest support for her work.

I'm an important advisor to the general,I analyze all war information for the general in the war.

The general sent me as a merchant to investigate military arrangements in the city, and to help connect forces against the tyrant, all of which were connected by my female ninja.

I have to get her out, like she was when she was a little girl when she was rescued by the Japanese merchant ship, otherwise THERE's nothing I can do here, I have to walk around, I have to bring a lot of valuable gifts, I have to make connections, I need to know how to rescue her.

 

[ron23333]

I chose this photo to make the personal design of Akiha(秋叶), not because of this dialogue. I simply think the Malay actress is very beautiful. Although it is a big bad film and there is a naked way, its film art can be exposed so much. In short, this is Akiha(秋叶),This dialogue also suits her

 

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Historical background
In 1580, Japanese residents were very closed. They regarded people in other regions as barbarians, but many countries such as China were in urgent need of trade. Therefore, immigrants from Russia to this city in Northeast Asia were discriminated against by Japanese residents and even tribal members. They lived in some temporary buildings on the mountain and were called mountain people.
The mountain people effectively fight against tribes and resistance forces, and firmly maintain the rule of tyrants.
They are the elite troops in the city.

 

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I put up my own answer :

1. In the story, if you are captured by the enemy, what your age is? What was your role in the rebellion? (The Queen? A Chiefess? A General? A Captain? )

A General
2. Reasons for being captured by the enemy?

The General lead a failed charge towards the loyalist castle, failed and get captured
3. Mode of escort: (for example, naked walking, prison car transportation, etc.)?

4. As a heroine who realizes her tragic ending is upon her, what gesture (verbal or otherwise) do you think is the most appropriate?

5. What kind of torture do you fear most?

6. When you find that an interrogator threatens you with bestiality and demand that you reveal all that you know, what will you do?

confess
7. You were imprisoned and bound in the town square. Your anus and genitals are heavily tortured by vicious ‘Pears’, and you see the traitor you hated most. What would you do?

You don't have many things to do, isn't it?
8. In the dark torture room, you sit on the triangular "Spanish donkey". Your whole body weight falls on the crotch at the top of the sharp corner. Both feet and ankles are also tied with a 50-pound bucket of water hanging from each. You haven't slept for three days. The enemy forces you to admit that you are a "stupid mother” who betrayed your king for a few copper coins". But you know that the so-called "King" has indiscriminately murdered people in your village. You joined the rebel army for justice. How would you respond?


confess

9. You are sitting on an iron chair with a burning brazier under it. You are thirsty and sweating all over. You feel like you are about to collapse. The enemy says that as long as you sign the confession, they will stop the torture and claim that you are a "Stupid female” monkey and that you don't know what you're doing. You will kneel down and salute the king under the gaze of the dead rebel's head hanging from a spike, and beg your interrogator for a quick death. Those dead rebel comrades are your family. They died to protect you. What kind of response will you make?


confess

10. You are hung upside down, spread-eagled on the rack. Two thick wooden phalluses are stuffed in your vagina and anus. Two executioners begin to see the two wooden rods with blunt saws. The violent vibration in your body is unbearable. At this time, the traitor you hate most loudly slanders your behaviour and claims: "This is a little bitch who acts like a slut in the rebels den. She is worthless.” You used to have feelings for this traitor, before his defection. Does this man want to somehow protect you from death and redeem his guilty conscience, or keep you as his slave? How will you respond/react?


Confess and became a sex slave

Sorry for not using the same character picture!

 

[ron23333]

I'll design an original character, too

1. In the story, if you are captured by the enemy, what your age is? What was your role in the rebellion? (The Queen? A Chiefess? A General? A Captain? )

I only 18 but i'm already a practised Pirate ship Captain.

2. Reasons for being captured by the enemy?

When my two sisters and I went ashore to inquire about the city undercover, a traitor denounced us to the enemy.

3. Mode of escort:

naked walking

4.As a heroine who realizes her tragic ending is upon her, what gesture (verbal or otherwise) do you think is the most appropriate?

I would cry out "Down with the tyrant" and comfort My two sisters

5. What kind of torture do you fear most?

Insects or eels,I scream and cry,But never beg for enemy

6. When you find that an interrogator threatens you with bestiality and demand that you reveal all that you know, what will you do?

I cursed him loudly, pounced on him like a lioness, and if I could, I would bite him hard, teach him a lesson, whatever the consequence might be

7. You were imprisoned and bound in the town square. Your anus and genitals are heavily tortured by vicious ‘Pears’, and you see the traitor you hated most. What would you do?

I will gnash my teeth and howling rage tell everyone that he is the worst pirate

8. In the dark torture room, you sit on the triangular "Spanish donkey". Your whole body weight falls on the crotch at the top of the sharp corner. Both feet and ankles are also tied with a 50-pound bucket of water hanging from each. You haven't slept for three days. The enemy forces you to admit that you are a "stupid mother” who betrayed your king for a few copper coins". But you know that the so-called "King" has indiscriminately murdered people in your village. You joined the rebel army for justice. How would you respond?

I silently recited my two sisters’s name in my heart and never gave in.
I cursed the tyrant as much as possible and would like to shed the last drop of blood for justice.

9. You are sitting on an iron chair with a burning brazier under it. You are thirsty and sweating all over. You feel like you are about to collapse. The enemy says that as long as you sign the confession, they will stop the torture and claim that you are a "Stupid female” monkey and that you don't know what you're doing. You will kneel down and salute the king under the gaze of the dead rebel's head hanging from a spike, and beg your interrogator for a quick death. Those dead rebel comrades are your family. They died to protect you. What kind of response will you make?

I would think of my two sisters, and I knew they would never allow me to do such a thing.
If I could not bear the torture, I could sign a letter of repentance, but I would never bow to a tyrant.

10. You are hung upside down, spread-eagled on the rack. Two thick wooden phalluses are stuffed in your vagina and anus. Two executioners begin saw the two wooden rods with blunt saws. The violent vibration in your body is unbearable. At this time, the traitor you hate most loudly slanders your behaviour and claims: "This is a little bitch who acts like a slut in the rebels den. She is worthless.” You used to have feelings for this traitor, before his defection. Does this man want to somehow protect you from death and redeem his guilty conscience, or keep you as his slave? How will you respond/react?

I will scream and cry,and blame myself for everything.
I hurt my two sisters.
I caused all the mistakes.
I refuse everything.
I just want to escape my conscience with death.
I caused all this. I am the culprit，I even deserve it。

 

[ron23333]

To make it easier for the reader to understand the story, I will briefly describe the relationship between the tyrant and the characters in the relevant storyline, starting with the king.
The king is very important, very few people see him, he only comes in the prologue, no one sees him the rest of the time, he's really busy.

 

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Crown Prince is just a title, many rebel generals will use his name, he is closely watched royal prisoner, he does not exist, any story will not mention him, he is locked up in the most mysterious part of the palace

 

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Princes have no right of succession, their social status is not low, but they have no power, they eat and drink everywhere, nominally head of the army, other than that, just more freedom than the crown prince

 

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Prime minister is a manager of the royal family. He takes charge of everything. He can even command the army. He was promoted to this position because of his age. Usually after the age of 75, he has become a nominal leader, but he has decision-making power. He is an important adviser to the king

 

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Eunuch commander is the most important role around a king.
He usually replaces the right of the prime minister.
He is the real Regent. Anyway, he is a eunuch.
He is very inhumane, which leads to a tyrant.
The king who appointed them is also a tyrant.
The situation in this city has been very poor because of their inhumanity

 

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Tyranny produced the Unpurchasable careerist, the real owner of the city, a man who controlled the policy of the king, turning it into a tool for his own profit, posing as a guardian of the king, often as a shogun, who could not be fired by the king, who did not need to kill him, and who was closely associated with the tyranny of the tyrant.
The two complement each other.

 

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Lord Chancellor is a kind of a scarecrow. He's just a symbol of justice, and everyone knows he's just a symbol of justice.
All his work is arranged in accordance with the orders of the king and regent