willowfall
Senator
I haven't written any erotic BDSM stories in a long time (currently doing some really bad poetry and a couple of books, as well as editing a book for a friend) but I always found it was easier for me if I tried to write like I was telling the story aurally not writing it down. That appears to be my style as a story teller.
I do have friends who tell me that when they read my writing they can hear my voice telling the story.
MY suggestion to you would be to just plow through the story while the idea is new and bright in your head. Then set it aside for a couple of days and then revamp it. And do it again and do it again.
I was going through a couple of my stories yesterday that are over 10 years old and still seeing things I wish I had written differently.
So I make the correction.
Remember the last guy who was perfect got crucified so don't be too set on making it perfect.
And let's face it your readers are probably going to get off while reading it anyway so they may not even get to the end.
"Perfect is the enemy of good enough."
Hope that helps.
kisses
I do have friends who tell me that when they read my writing they can hear my voice telling the story.
MY suggestion to you would be to just plow through the story while the idea is new and bright in your head. Then set it aside for a couple of days and then revamp it. And do it again and do it again.
I was going through a couple of my stories yesterday that are over 10 years old and still seeing things I wish I had written differently.
So I make the correction.
Remember the last guy who was perfect got crucified so don't be too set on making it perfect.
And let's face it your readers are probably going to get off while reading it anyway so they may not even get to the end.
"Perfect is the enemy of good enough."
Hope that helps.
kisses