Are you thinking about creating this scene? Would love it!
Although two scenes were she (or I) would shed a robe and/or climb onto the altar would be very erotic.
I thought it was your scene and you have the master files for it.
I would tend to do it different.
My opinion for what its worth - its a very nice picture.......... but.
It needs to be seedier....... The fashion show executioner, needs to dress down a bit.
Do Amazon types do costume jewellery?
The executioner more of a pro. - more clinical - whilst you don't care less about the victims suffering, you are going to get it right because its your job and you don't want to look stupid.
The vic - willing sacrifice - you say fair -enough. Needs more emotion. Not Arghhh... emotion - subtle worried unsure apprehensive. Also put a bit of sexual exstacy into the expression (well more than a bit) The poor girls pussy must be a lake of girl juice - I speculate idly.
She needs to have her eyes closed - I mean who wants to see a knife get stuck into their heart willing or otherwise.
She opens them when the knife bites into her. Her chest rising to greet the blade.
Brief pain then nothing - corpse eyes half opened glazed.
Close-ups -Close ups and work those angles.
Have I already said that bit its late Sunday evening here?