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This is a super story! Many thanks for such hard and thoughtful work! If I may, just a few small wishes.
1. It would be great if during the execution of the next two girls there was a view of the pictures not only from the front, but sometimes from other angles (behind and a little from below).
2. It would be great if you could see the girl’s face more often with all the detailed emotions at different stages of immersing the stake into her body (for the first girl, the emotions on her face are conveyed in detail at the preparatory stages of the execution and during the very first stage of landing on the stake, and then the angle no longer allowed a good look at the expression on the face of the victim).
3. If we could add some taunting remarks from the audience present to the plot (if the audience is not planned, then for example the Captain), it would be great! Soldiers, too, may not be so serious and indifferent guys, but for example, grinning contented scoundrels who, by the expression on their faces, are clearly experiencing sexual arousal and perverted pleasure from what is happening.
I'm sorry if I want too much...
But I like it just the way it is! This is the best story I have ever seen on this subject! Thanks again!