Jedakk's Masterpiece

[Deleted member jedakk]

Sabina faints on the cross as the agony becomes too much. Her body hangs relaxed, inert, as the crowd watches. Julia Lepida narrates:

Her eyes closed, her head dropped forward with her chin against her chest, and all the tension in her tortured body released as she sagged down further. She was unconscious, fainted. I let out the breath I’d been holding and felt the tension flow out of my body. It was the first moment since her execution began that the desperate sounds of her suffering and struggling had stopped. There were only the tortured groans of the dying murderer crucified on the cross next to her.​

Long moments passed during which the girl hung there inert, her abdomen pulsing as she continued to draw in short, choppy breaths and push them out. Some in the crowd got into conversations about this and that, the ordinary events of life that, for them, would go on. None of them drifted away. They all wanted to see the completion of her crucifixion, to listen to her scream and watch her struggles as those big iron nails were driven through each of her feet, one after the other.​

Balbus the executioner also narrates this scene. He takes advantage of it to teach his new German slave, Gundericus, some things about crucifixion.

She continued trying to push upwards, but suddenly her feet slipped and she dropped heavily, tits bouncing and more agonized screaming. Then the screaming stopped, her eyes rolled back and her head fell forward on her chest as her body relaxed in a faint.​

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“Quintus Caelius, shouldn’t they nail her feet now?” Julia Lepida asked me.​

​

“No, not yet. She’ll be back with us in a moment. She’ll tire soon and then we’ll nail her feet,” I answered. “Don’t worry, she still has at least three days in her, maybe four. She thinks she’s hurting now, but she hasn’t really started hurting yet. The real pain won’t hit her for a few hours.”​

​

We waited. I heard some of the crowd exchanging bets as to how long this slave girl would be unconscious.​

​

“Gundericus, these victims will faint from the pain from time to time. It’s normal,” I said. “Only when it happens before no more than a day or two on the cross do you have to worry about them dying too soon on you. If one of them stops breathing and you think it’s too soon, the best thing is to lift her up and jam the cornu up her asshole. She won’t slip off, and she’ll breathe whether she wants to or not.​

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“Now see how this one is breathing slow and regular, even though she's out? Sometimes they faint because of the pain, but most of the time, it's panic. They breathe so fast and hard it puts them out. I see them do it almost every time.​

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“When they're tired and hanging by their wrists, they can't suck in a full breath. It makes them feel like they're being smothered or strangled, so they panic and try to get more breath. They feel like they can’t get enough, and they try so hard that they get too much and they faint. Their body knows how much air it needs, and once they faint, their breathing slows down to normal. It’s always like this.​

​

“So, nailing the feet? How to tell the best place for the feet?”​

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“Up close to her ass, but not so high that she can rest her ass on her heels. The cross takes a price out of them for everything! People have to see that. The only thing we give them to rest their bare asses on is one that makes them pay, one of those sharp-edged sediles or the point of a cornu. Fancier, more painful things sometimes, if I feel like it or some dominus asks.​

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“But when she’s down, you want her to hang with all of her weight on her wrists. As she starts to tire, she'll hang longer, it will get harder and harder for her to breathe, and finally she'll begin to feel like she can't get enough air. That will keep her moving and slowly using up her strength. It shows off her cunnus, too, more humiliating that way. The best way to find the position for the feet is with her hanging free by the wrists, so she’s stretched out and you can see where her ass comes to.”​

 

[tan2000]

I prefer these new 2020 remake version, the visual very stunning, more detail along the depth of the story. And especially I love the whip marks, they looks more erotic than the old version. Hopefully one day you can also remake the whipping scene of her back as well

 

[SkinnyCrux]

You've updated very early today, @jedakk ! Is there a second series today?

 

[Deleted member jedakk]

Probably overdoing it, but here are some more renders from Scene 14b where she's fainted. I have 36 renders of this scene, and there are a few people who have seen them all and picked out their top ten, or more in many cases. Those are the ones I post, mostly, but I like these too.

 

[Esmeralda019]

Jedakk, you do know this shot of Sabina is ridiculously erotic?

Now ... this ...... ... IS EROTIC

 

[Deleted member jedakk]

You've updated very early today, @jedakk ! Is there a second series today?

No, I don't have so many scenes done that I would want to post more than one per day. Damned puppy got me up early this morning wanting to go out! I did post more renders of the same scene this time, just because I saw more of them that I wanted to share. Here's the little monster that got me up:

 

[Esmeralda019]

btw. @jedakk: I love your daily work!!!

 

[Deleted member jedakk]

Now ... this ...... View attachment 957040View attachment 957041View attachment 957042View attachment 957043View attachment 957044 ... IS EROTIC

I thought those scenes would be pretty erotic. I did them back in 2011-2012 when each render took a couple of hours to run.

 

[Esmeralda019]

I am very curious to see how it will continue. Will Sabina ride the Cornu? (even more erotic?)

 

[mp5stab]

Tightened up and centered on Sabina, the render makes a breathtaking desktop.

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I would never be so bold as to have anything like *that* on my desktop. Even something subtle like an Appian Way background might be a little sus. You must have a very private computer... or a fun exhibitionist streak.

 

[Apostate]

I would never be so bold as to have anything like *that* on my desktop. Even something subtle like an Appian Way background might be a little sus. You must have a very private computer... or a fun exhibitionist streak.

The former.

 

[Gibbs505]

No, I don't have so many scenes done that I would want to post more than one per day. Damned puppy got me up early this morning wanting to go out! I did post more renders of the same scene this time, just because I saw more of them that I wanted to share. Here's the little monster that got me up:

Ahhhh!

 

[Yupar]

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Sabina is just a woman hanging from her cross. Her torture draws more attention than the slave-woman deserves. But I must say, her body hanging there is worth my time spent looking at her...

I totally agree with you, she could be a dignified lady with high rank (actually she is)

 

[Yupar]

It has been a lot of years for me. And so far, I haven't been able to truly walk away from this fascination. I don't expect that I ever truly will, even though I might manage to disappear from the forums once and for all.

You and me are same in this kinda scenerio

 

[Yupar]

Sabina faints on the cross as the agony becomes too much. Her body hangs relaxed, inert, as the crowd watches. Julia Lepida narrates:

Her eyes closed, her head dropped forward with her chin against her chest, and all the tension in her tortured body released as she sagged down further. She was unconscious, fainted. I let out the breath I’d been holding and felt the tension flow out of my body. It was the first moment since her execution began that the desperate sounds of her suffering and struggling had stopped. There were only the tortured groans of the dying murderer crucified on the cross next to her.​

Long moments passed during which the girl hung there inert, her abdomen pulsing as she continued to draw in short, choppy breaths and push them out. Some in the crowd got into conversations about this and that, the ordinary events of life that, for them, would go on. None of them drifted away. They all wanted to see the completion of her crucifixion, to listen to her scream and watch her struggles as those big iron nails were driven through each of her feet, one after the other.​

Balbus the executioner also narrates this scene. He takes advantage of it to teach his new German slave, Gundericus, some things about crucifixion.

She continued trying to push upwards, but suddenly her feet slipped and she dropped heavily, tits bouncing and more agonized screaming. Then the screaming stopped, her eyes rolled back and her head fell forward on her chest as her body relaxed in a faint.​

​

“Quintus Caelius, shouldn’t they nail her feet now?” Julia Lepida asked me.​

​

“No, not yet. She’ll be back with us in a moment. She’ll tire soon and then we’ll nail her feet,” I answered. “Don’t worry, she still has at least three days in her, maybe four. She thinks she’s hurting now, but she hasn’t really started hurting yet. The real pain won’t hit her for a few hours.”​

​

We waited. I heard some of the crowd exchanging bets as to how long this slave girl would be unconscious.​

​

“Gundericus, these victims will faint from the pain from time to time. It’s normal,” I said. “Only when it happens before no more than a day or two on the cross do you have to worry about them dying too soon on you. If one of them stops breathing and you think it’s too soon, the best thing is to lift her up and jam the cornu up her asshole. She won’t slip off, and she’ll breathe whether she wants to or not.​

​

“Now see how this one is breathing slow and regular, even though she's out? Sometimes they faint because of the pain, but most of the time, it's panic. They breathe so fast and hard it puts them out. I see them do it almost every time.​

​

“When they're tired and hanging by their wrists, they can't suck in a full breath. It makes them feel like they're being smothered or strangled, so they panic and try to get more breath. They feel like they can’t get enough, and they try so hard that they get too much and they faint. Their body knows how much air it needs, and once they faint, their breathing slows down to normal. It’s always like this.​

​

“So, nailing the feet? How to tell the best place for the feet?”​

​

“Up close to her ass, but not so high that she can rest her ass on her heels. The cross takes a price out of them for everything! People have to see that. The only thing we give them to rest their bare asses on is one that makes them pay, one of those sharp-edged sediles or the point of a cornu. Fancier, more painful things sometimes, if I feel like it or some dominus asks.​

​

“But when she’s down, you want her to hang with all of her weight on her wrists. As she starts to tire, she'll hang longer, it will get harder and harder for her to breathe, and finally she'll begin to feel like she can't get enough air. That will keep her moving and slowly using up her strength. It shows off her cunnus, too, more humiliating that way. The best way to find the position for the feet is with her hanging free by the wrists, so she’s stretched out and you can see where her ass comes to.”​

Probably overdoing it, but here are some more renders from Scene 14b where she's fainted. I have 36 renders of this scene, and there are a few people who have seen them all and picked out their top ten, or more in many cases. Those are the ones I post, mostly, but I like these too.

I cant tell anymore on this two sets..just wanna say..."You are killing me ! "

 

[tan2000]

I thought those scenes would be pretty erotic. I did them back in 2011-2012 when each render took a couple of hours to run.

Yes these whipping (test) scenes that I mentioned previously, and they're really erotic! Hopefully you can remake these scenes again, I believe the remake will more erotic and amusing to watch because the 2020 whip marks version you've made more realistic than the original one.

 

[Kav]

Sabina faints on the cross as the agony becomes too much. Her body hangs relaxed, inert, as the crowd watches. Julia Lepida narrates:

Her eyes closed, her head dropped forward with her chin against her chest, and all the tension in her tortured body released as she sagged down further. She was unconscious, fainted. I let out the breath I’d been holding and felt the tension flow out of my body. It was the first moment since her execution began that the desperate sounds of her suffering and struggling had stopped. There were only the tortured groans of the dying murderer crucified on the cross next to her.​

Long moments passed during which the girl hung there inert, her abdomen pulsing as she continued to draw in short, choppy breaths and push them out. Some in the crowd got into conversations about this and that, the ordinary events of life that, for them, would go on. None of them drifted away. They all wanted to see the completion of her crucifixion, to listen to her scream and watch her struggles as those big iron nails were driven through each of her feet, one after the other.​

Balbus the executioner also narrates this scene. He takes advantage of it to teach his new German slave, Gundericus, some things about crucifixion.

She continued trying to push upwards, but suddenly her feet slipped and she dropped heavily, tits bouncing and more agonized screaming. Then the screaming stopped, her eyes rolled back and her head fell forward on her chest as her body relaxed in a faint.​

​

“Quintus Caelius, shouldn’t they nail her feet now?” Julia Lepida asked me.​

​

“No, not yet. She’ll be back with us in a moment. She’ll tire soon and then we’ll nail her feet,” I answered. “Don’t worry, she still has at least three days in her, maybe four. She thinks she’s hurting now, but she hasn’t really started hurting yet. The real pain won’t hit her for a few hours.”​

​

We waited. I heard some of the crowd exchanging bets as to how long this slave girl would be unconscious.​

​

“Gundericus, these victims will faint from the pain from time to time. It’s normal,” I said. “Only when it happens before no more than a day or two on the cross do you have to worry about them dying too soon on you. If one of them stops breathing and you think it’s too soon, the best thing is to lift her up and jam the cornu up her asshole. She won’t slip off, and she’ll breathe whether she wants to or not.​

​

“Now see how this one is breathing slow and regular, even though she's out? Sometimes they faint because of the pain, but most of the time, it's panic. They breathe so fast and hard it puts them out. I see them do it almost every time.​

​

“When they're tired and hanging by their wrists, they can't suck in a full breath. It makes them feel like they're being smothered or strangled, so they panic and try to get more breath. They feel like they can’t get enough, and they try so hard that they get too much and they faint. Their body knows how much air it needs, and once they faint, their breathing slows down to normal. It’s always like this.​

​

“So, nailing the feet? How to tell the best place for the feet?”​

​

“Up close to her ass, but not so high that she can rest her ass on her heels. The cross takes a price out of them for everything! People have to see that. The only thing we give them to rest their bare asses on is one that makes them pay, one of those sharp-edged sediles or the point of a cornu. Fancier, more painful things sometimes, if I feel like it or some dominus asks.​

​

“But when she’s down, you want her to hang with all of her weight on her wrists. As she starts to tire, she'll hang longer, it will get harder and harder for her to breathe, and finally she'll begin to feel like she can't get enough air. That will keep her moving and slowly using up her strength. It shows off her cunnus, too, more humiliating that way. The best way to find the position for the feet is with her hanging free by the wrists, so she’s stretched out and you can see where her ass comes to.”​

I love how her feet just dangle there.

I am sure that will be rectified soon, I am sure. We don't want her to too uncomfortable now do we?

 

[o north]

Probably overdoing it, but here are some more renders from Scene 14b where she's fainted. I have 36 renders of this scene, and there are a few people who have seen them all and picked out their top ten, or more in many cases. Those are the ones I post, mostly, but I like these too.

Post 'em all. We'll like anything you offer.

 

[michael lane]

Post 'em all. We'll like anything you offer.

Post 'em all. We'll like anything you offer.

if i was a slave girl i would do ANYTHING to get my domina to hang me up on a cross,and get flogged harshly after too

 

[Deleted member jedakk]

I would and maybe you will, but I've had people complain about there being three renders of the same scene used as illustrations in the story. Honestly, some of these camera angles are so different that you see the scene in a different way.