You are not alone in wanting a wrap up, but PrPr needs time to recover from his already Herculean efforts. In any case Barb and Amanda will take time to recover from their encounter with those stainless steel phallic poles and then being shipped to Borneo.I think you did an exemplary job with all the characters, even providing a dramatis personae to keep the rest of us up to speed. I agree with the idea of giving Barb a 'rest' in the run-up to X-day, the interest in a succession of "and she was raped and beaten again" would have soon waned, yet we needed the slowly building tension of the final days and hours.
Personally I would like a wrap-up, perhaps a month later; does RBG carry on as if nothing happened? did Kathy 'behave'? will Frost join the guards? does the drugs squad (sorry, forgot the initials, senility) get reformed? But fear not for your ego------we all have vivid enough imaginations to plot storylines that fit with our own style of erotic fiction. It's a pity the imagined sight of RBG on the caning frame is not particularly erotic.
Since I don't chew gum or take drugs, I fancy a little trip, to sit, straw boater on head, daringly blazer-less but old school tie firmly knotted, watching a cricket match and dreamily replaying that whole story in my head. And as the sun beats down, and the G&T takes hold, I spy a young blond girl with the demeanour of a cheer-leader, carrying a folder of papers, being pursued by a fat, greasy-looking rogue, and I leap up to protect her....................
It would be great if Frost joined the guards and the girls` sentences were quashed ( but not before a humiliating intake to the labour camp and Barb`s punishment for the inevitable breach(es) of discipline.
The thought of RBG being brought down along with the odious Williams is appealing, but caning No. Perhaps the Prosecution could appeal against the leniency of Josephine`s sentence and she could have fifty or so strokes added to it.